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...short while later Lesser Moon rose shyly behind them. Finn thought he could see a mountain range in the distance. "Could it be the Obodin’s Range?" he wondered sleepily. But it was forbidden!!!

His host’s rumbling voice gave him a start. "Hold tight and pay attention" Bel'ator'i said. "I must to do what’s needful without worrying about you falling."

"What.?…" Finn started, but only got a snapped order to hush in return. He thought they might be readying to land, but they were gaining speed instead, the dragon’s wings flapping harder, strong muscles moving smoothly. Finn leaned forward, holding tight, yet looking around, trying to discern reasons for change in Bel'ator'i’s demeanor.

At first Finn discovered nothing, but – dragon’s speed still increasing, his breathing a low swishing sound -- soon enough the combined light from the two moons showed him a shadow on their trail. Two shadows. And closing.

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