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...approched the check in desk. 

"um hi." i said shyly. she really was beautiful.

"do you have a reservation?"

"uhhhhh no."

"i'm sorry sir but we're all booked up. you need a reservation" The woman said apoligeticly.

"oh, okay" i said feeling a little embarrassed.

Slowly i turned."bribe her" Jack hissed.

I turned back to the young lady, She stared at me curiously. Her name tag said Stacy.  I cleared my throat and pulled out a large sum of cash from my coat pocket "Stacy is it?" She nodded

"would this change your mind?" i could feel Jack taking over me at this point but i fought him baack. I handed Stacy the money.

She took it and casually put it in her pocket."Oh! would you look at that a room just became available!" I nodded smiling. Stacy typed a few things on her computer then handed me a keycard."room 3160. have a nice day sir."

I gratfuly took the keycard  an turned to the elevator.

in which Jack decides to kill Stacey

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