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...mouth.

“Wha..” muffled cries came from the next room.. “thack” – a slashing noise, and “thump”.

No..!! God!!”, “Aaah!” “thack”…. “thump”.

Ben and Tommy knew it was something bad. Very bad. They were too frightened to move. The shadow walked back, past their bedroom again. “thud .. thud..” and the noise got fainter and fainter until it finally stopped.

Mustering their courage, hand in hand, Ben and Tommy tip-toed out of the bedroom, and walked out to the next room.

AAAAHHH!!!” this was no nightmare. Ben joined Tommy and screamed, as he saw both his parents lying in a pool of blood, their throats slashed and eye balls popping out in a most grotesque manner.

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