I wanted to take a minute to thank you all for your comments, advice and much needed support. You guys have helped me shape this story into what it is now.
I also wanted to tell you that Samael’s going through a thorough edit as it had a few major flaws.
This being said, I will mark this version as being closed and will open a new one once the edit is done (and advise you of course).
Don’t worry, The characters stay the same, most of the action remains the same. What changes is their views and thoughts on certain things. The mood will slightly change as well and some action will be inserted here and there.
As always, don’t hesitate to tell me what you think of this story and if you have suggestions, advice or any comments whatsoever, I’m all ears. :)
Thank you kindly,
The edited version is available: http://www.protagonize.com/story/samael-edited