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You agree to follow Torn deeper into the woods.

You smile and with a laugh say, "and whats a pack of spiders? Thats nothing i cant handle." Torn smiles and draws his hood back onto his head, "good now follow me i know an easy path." You follow Torn as he darts into the woods, it seems as though he picks the deepest part of the underbrush to walk into but as you begin to push through the foliage easily bends aside. You follow Torn for awhile almost running as you try to keep him in sight, you lose him for a second but rounding a copse of trees see him crouching behind a stump. As you slow your pace and walk up to him you realize your breathing rather heavily for such a little run. "Slightly out of shape i see." Chuckles Torn, you blush and with a tilt of your head say "We'll see how out of shape i am when we get to these spiders." Torn points ahead past the stump at first it seems as though the clearing is cloaked in mist but upon closer inspection you realize its a giant web covering the trees. "Wow thats amazing, but wait i see movement inside the web." You look down and see that Torn is already gone you catch sight of him to the west of the clearing entering it slowly. Torn motions for you to enter. You draw your sword and crouching inch your way forward, you head towards the movement. As you near the webbing you see it is not that thick, there is lots of it though and it does obscure your vision. Suddenly a dark shape hurtles towards you from the side and another from the front, you duck the first and slash upwards to the side. You catch the flying shape square in the middle and your sword slices through it splashing your face with foul smelling blood and chunks or hairy spider carapace. Turning quickly you slice to the left with your sword but the spider is faster then you and it bowls into your legs its beady multifaceted eyes glow red in the dim web filled clearing. You manage to keep your balance and with a downward chop sever the spider in twain. Looking to the west you see Torn similarly dispatching at least four spiders he weaves his twin swords gracefully slashing left and slicing right, he is so caught up in his dance of death that he doesn't notice a huge black shape shambling towards him. You run yelling straight at the creature, "Die foul beast!" It turns towards you and at that moment Torn appears jumping over top of it and plunging his swords both into the monstrosity's head up to their hilts. The spider drops slowly to the ground and the remaining shapes scuttle into the webbing. "Nice work Kalith, glad to have you here to help." Torn smiles and you just catch the gleam in his eye in time to dodge his blade. You back away and standing in a totally defensive stance have to make a decision.

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snowstormfir "the only thing i have to say that's bad about this story is that for most of the way there's only one path to pick, so that's why i have put in an extra one on the start and another one later on, because currently it's not pick-a-path, its decide to go this way or no way, or write a way, so that's why I'm encouraging all of you to write on different options, not just the same story the whole way through, make it so you can PICK out of a choice of paths, so please, write on different ones than everybody else, that's my rant over"
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REDFOX "yeh i know, but i left for a while then came and re-read, hour had gone by then =[

RF
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Rac7hel "you can edit the story after it's published, for the first hour I think."
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REDFOX "yeah i noticed i had named him pickles when i re-read it the second time, after it had been published god damn it.

Yeah i dunno why i turned him into a lemon, interesting to see where it goes though, thanks for feedback,

RF
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Burndtree "Ohhh, but if only I waren't the trembling sort -- an adventurer, too, I might be. But I'm safe and it suits me to sip my ale and hear of all You Great...uh, Questers questing!"
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Crymzon "I go away for a day and everything expands ... Awesome!!

Welcome to RF excellent branch!
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Jillian "Haha, 'The Seeds of Rufus's furry loins'; equally disgusting as delightful.

Nice : )
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Rac7hel "Great story! and a very interesting world. :)"
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Crymzon "I think my head is swelling!

Obviously those comments go for the team which has just gotten one person bigger. Excellent!! =)

I'll probably post down both branches that have been offered to keep everyone involved and erm ... stuff.

Thanks again for the lovely comments!
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Jillian "I absolutely lovelovelove this story.

Actually, if anyone should walk up to me today and ask, "Do you know what the most wonderful and hilarious adventure tale in the entire world is?" I would smile and easily reply: "Yes, in fact, I do. It's called Questworld."
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Bolsheviki "Not all that long, I should think. =D
My god but I love Kal. I want to hug him. x3
Although he might decapitate me if I do that. Still. If I tie his hands behind his back first...
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Crymzon "Kal is probably the most bitter and twisted character I've ever created. Let's see how long it takes him to do something really unpleasant to his companions."
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Crymzon "Thanks for the comment Jillian, and not at all any advice is good advice in my book.

I'll put my hands up and say my biggest downfall is my grammar and I know my sentences have a tendency to run on. I'll do my best to remember where the commas should go and see if it works.

Anyway, thanks again =)
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Crymzon "I love the idea of swapping words into latin you can make something really silly sound really serious. I reckon we should stick with that idea, it's a good one.

Again, very well done.
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Bolsheviki "Why thank you. I like your bits as well, they make me laugh. =3 This could definately be an entertaining story."
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Bolsheviki "No worries. =3
Hope you like my contribution. n_n The idea of finding large weapons in small packs comes from all the adventure roleplaying games my brother plays...
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Crymzon "Yes and erm ... yes ... sort of a spoof on the whole sword-and-sorcery genre really. Well it will be if enough people branch, I'll be adding too obviously but I think I'll wait for someone else to do their thing first. Thanks for being my first commenter =)"
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Bolsheviki "I love this idea. xD Based on your sword-and-sorcery fantasy books and roleplaying games, yes?
I'll have to branch this when I can...
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