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..."No you can't." Whispered Kal softly.

"No I can't." Repeated Pickle looking despondantly at the ground.

Falcon and Rufus looked at the mage confused.

"You can or you can't?" Said Falcon scratching his head.

Kal chimed in with a grin on his face.

"He can't. He hears voices in his head and talks to them sometimes. He gets very confused poor soul. Don't you Pickle?"

"Erm ..."

"Don't you. Pickle."

"Oh yes, yes I do ... terrible problem really." The mage grumbled thumbing his robe nervously with his finger tips.

Kal and Falcon spent the next ten minutes clearing rubble to reveal the massive opening Rufus was talking about. There was certainly and opening. At it was certainly massive. If you were a rat. The other problem was that it was the only way out of this caven. The walls around where they stood were to sheer to climb back up.

Kal was getting a headache.

Find some interesting way back to the ledge forsaking any chance of treasure.

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