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Questworld

Kalith was not happy.

"Go and find The Lost Tombs of the Ever Swamps. Plenty of treasure to be had there. It'll be good to start your career with a lesser known dungeon. If you can prove yourself there you can join your brothers and sister on the more difficult hunts."

Ewen, his father had been one of the greatest Hero's on all of the Questworld in his day. There didn't seem to be a dungeon he hadn't looted or a battle he hadn't been involved in, in his sixty years. Now the gauntlet had been laid down for his children to go and get butchered to carry on the family name.

On a world riddled with dungeons that magically altered ever year, where wars broke out purely because there wasn't much better to do or because a new race of monsters had randomely appeared somewhere and threatened something or someone the choice wasn't so much as to whether you became a hero but how well you did it. This was measured in glory. Fame, and most importantly life expectancy. Kal was beginning to think that for him the latter of these was particularly short.

All his father had done was stab the blade of his dagger into the map of the local area and picked a random place. This meant that the "Lost Tombs" wheren't so much lost but hadn't been found yet. If they had they where crawling with things with big teeth and claws so nobody had made it back to prove their existance.

The other problem with the Questworld was that if you gave something a name it popped into existance. So if the Tombs hadn't been there originally they certainly where now.

Kal had been wandering around the swamp for nearly a week. He was tired, smelly and covered in stale blood and he hadn't even found his quarry yet. Having just shoved his axe into another band of roving Marsh Goblins he'd decided to "borrow" their camp.

He removed one of his boots and started picking the leeches off the base of his foot with the flat of a dagger. He chuckled glumly.

"Well at least someone's eating properly."

His stomach rumbled, he'd run out of supplies two days ago after accidentally feeding his backpack to a rather large Swamp Rat. It had been the better choice between that and his arm.

Night was falling fast and he was wondering what to do next. Lighting a fire would have been one idea but things where attracted to light and there where bigger things to worry about out here than the odd goblin or overgrown vermin. If he slept in the dark there was an equally good chance that he wouldn't wake up again. Or he could just rest a little and press on hoping to find the tomb before something found him.

Whatever he did he'd have to remove the slimy sucky things from between his toes first as he was beginning to feel faint.

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for snowstormfir "the only thing i have to say that's bad about this story is that for most of the way there's only one path to pick, so that's why i have put in an extra one on the start and another one later on, because currently it's not pick-a-path, its decide to go this way or no way, or write a way, so that's why I'm encouraging all of you to write on different options, not just the same story the whole way through, make it so you can PICK out of a choice of paths, so please, write on different ones than everybody else, that's my rant over"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for REDFOX "yeh i know, but i left for a while then came and re-read, hour had gone by then =[

RF
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "you can edit the story after it's published, for the first hour I think."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for REDFOX "yeah i noticed i had named him pickles when i re-read it the second time, after it had been published god damn it.

Yeah i dunno why i turned him into a lemon, interesting to see where it goes though, thanks for feedback,

RF
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Burndtree "Ohhh, but if only I waren't the trembling sort -- an adventurer, too, I might be. But I'm safe and it suits me to sip my ale and hear of all You Great...uh, Questers questing!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "I go away for a day and everything expands ... Awesome!!

Welcome to RF excellent branch!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Haha, 'The Seeds of Rufus's furry loins'; equally disgusting as delightful.

Nice : )
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "Great story! and a very interesting world. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "I think my head is swelling!

Obviously those comments go for the team which has just gotten one person bigger. Excellent!! =)

I'll probably post down both branches that have been offered to keep everyone involved and erm ... stuff.

Thanks again for the lovely comments!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "I absolutely lovelovelove this story.

Actually, if anyone should walk up to me today and ask, "Do you know what the most wonderful and hilarious adventure tale in the entire world is?" I would smile and easily reply: "Yes, in fact, I do. It's called Questworld."
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Bolsheviki "Not all that long, I should think. =D
My god but I love Kal. I want to hug him. x3
Although he might decapitate me if I do that. Still. If I tie his hands behind his back first...
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "Kal is probably the most bitter and twisted character I've ever created. Let's see how long it takes him to do something really unpleasant to his companions."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "Thanks for the comment Jillian, and not at all any advice is good advice in my book.

I'll put my hands up and say my biggest downfall is my grammar and I know my sentences have a tendency to run on. I'll do my best to remember where the commas should go and see if it works.

Anyway, thanks again =)
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "I love the idea of swapping words into latin you can make something really silly sound really serious. I reckon we should stick with that idea, it's a good one.

Again, very well done.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Bolsheviki "Why thank you. I like your bits as well, they make me laugh. =3 This could definately be an entertaining story."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Bolsheviki "No worries. =3
Hope you like my contribution. n_n The idea of finding large weapons in small packs comes from all the adventure roleplaying games my brother plays...
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "Yes and erm ... yes ... sort of a spoof on the whole sword-and-sorcery genre really. Well it will be if enough people branch, I'll be adding too obviously but I think I'll wait for someone else to do their thing first. Thanks for being my first commenter =)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Bolsheviki "I love this idea. xD Based on your sword-and-sorcery fantasy books and roleplaying games, yes?
I'll have to branch this when I can...
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