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After the frustrating appointment with the doctor, Kaida met Neal for a beer at Wheelhouse Pub.  It had the best view of the inner harbor and the wait-staff knew her by name.

Kaida checked her appearance in the window before stepping inside.  She had shoulder-length black hair and enormous brown eyes over pale, pale cheeks.   She wore a red sundress that was a little too bright for the day, but then, she'd been feeling fragile all week and wanted the attention.  It put her in a position of power.

She'd wanted a public place to have it out with Neal.  Public places meant less chance of a scene.  It wasn't that Neal wasn't kind or wasn't considerate.  He just... wasn't enough. 

They had an active social life and had several mutual friends.  Hell, they even looked good together. He was tall and muscular, complementing her lithe physique.  But Neal just seemed so... intimately mundane.   And more and more, she'd been craving adventure.

He could barely satiate her longings.  When she'd wake up in the middle of the night, her body nearly on fire with desire, the only thing she could do was to fantasize herself to an unsatisfactory conclusion.  Breaking up with Neal was simply a convenience to allow her to find other ways to meet her needs...

"I talked to one of the boys in Archives."  Neal started off, even before she'd managed to make herself comfortable.  "Did you know that your apartment used to be a brothel at the turn of the century?"

She hadn't.  But the city had a lot of history and the neighborhood was one of those newly re-gentrified locations that had once boasted a higher class than resided there currently.  So, it didn't surprise Kaida too much.

"So, I took the liberty of hiring a psychic investigator."  Neal said, clearly  misinterpreting her expression.  She was interested in the history of the house, but it was an academic interest at best.

"I'm sorry," Kaida sputtered.  "You did what?"  Kaida gave Neal one of her best icy stares.  "When is this crackpot supposed to be there?"

"Been and gone, honey"  Neal grinned.  "And yup, you are so haunted.  Your apartment was one of the rooms they used for very special occasions.  Total group things.  Very kinky.  A couple of guys died there in a fire in the early twenties.  Supposedly, the madame tried to cover up a sailor who'd died chained to the bed."

Kaida shook her head.   It was preposterous.  But it explained a few things.  In a city with an exceptionally low rental rate, she'd managed to rent the apartment with almost no fuss.  They'd made love two, sometimes three times a night, and she often felt as if they were being watched. 

She'd often found things in her apartment in places different from where she'd placed them.  The television remote, her cell-phone, her vibrator. 

More recently, there'd been the overzealous sounds of lovemaking coming from apartment 2C, and someone--she'd blamed Neal--had strewn the contents of her underwear drawer across her bed.  Twice.

All of that could've been evidence of supernatural activity.  Or it could be that her hormones were starting to catch up to her and Neal really wasn't keeping up.

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Dysphemism "Welcome back, Jait."
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surreal78 "Nice! jait, hard at work updating some of my favourites."
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JJ1979 "Lateral thinking Jait! Love it! Just what I had in mind, of course..."
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JJ1979 "Umm... because I am a dunce! Or maybe it's something incredibly subtle..."
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JJ1979 "Furry muff! I shouldn't be so sensitive anyway!"
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surreal78 "Actually, I liked it. Someone else must have voted it down, I gave it a 4.5 average over 2 branches. Added it to my faves. :)"
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JJ1979 "Oh yeah... didn't notice that! What didn't you like about this story incidentaly? Feedback always welcome..."
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JJ1979 "SOMEONE PICK-UP THE BATTON ON THIS ONE PLEASE!! I'm sure it's incredibly undignified to make such a blatant plea... but the poor baby has been neglected terribly!!!"
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jait "Thanks for the comment. I figure that it wasn't that Neal was boring so much as Kaida's appetite has dwarfed his ability to satiate it. So, I guess I didn't get that through strongly enough...

The motive for the break-up (well, in my mind) was simply that she needed to release herself to seek more--more partners? more experiences?--Without a sense that she was cheating.

I suspect that the motive may change in future branches, as the story grows, as it was never clearly stated.
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3RebeccaLouise "I really like the opening and the chance of a window into the the life of your charactor Kaida but i had expected something emotive between them and was quite surprised that Neal had hired a psychic investigator as i think you suggest in your writing that he is quite a placid and boring guy and that to me seems quite out of touch which the charactor i built up in my mind but the title really captured my attention as it was so original and quirky and it made me smile."
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Rac7hel "It made me giggle too"
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jait "I just had to find a way to use the word "Poltergasms." It makes me giggle."
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Rac7hel "sounds interesting... in an... interesting sort of way."

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