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...and what you're going for here Mr. Hart, there's, you're a nobody."

    "Don't you recognize me?!"

He seems to think for a moment then as I point to the scar on my right temple his eyes widen. "You! It' can't be, I saw you die! We made sure that you'd never come back up."

    "I did, the shovel gave me this scar but you were too proud too look a mook in the eyes to notice me for who I am. I know you better than your know yourself and your going down."

He smiles and says, "Well, I guess we'll just have to bury you deep this time."

What did he say?

I feel strong hands wrap around me and then i feel a prick in my neck. My body goes limp. He stand up and looks over me. Why didn't I hear them come from behind. I look back through blurry eyes, Burk, not him.

    "Let's see you get out of this one, Mr. Hart, if that is your real name? Would you like that on your tombstone?"

You wake up but it's dark, you feel around you, it's a coffin

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Rac7hel CHARACTERS:
-- You (Edward) - a police officer in your mid-30's
-- Cal Beauchamp - a wealthy, respected 28-year-old businessman who you know to be a murderer.
-- Gabrielle - your 19-year-old sister who is engaged to Cal and recently pregnant.
-- Joseph - normal-looking 30-something-year-old guy who does Tarot readings on the street.
-- Old man - an old man who dresses like a gypsy and works on the street, saying creepy rude things to people for money.
-- Nicolas Dias - depends on who you ask.

SETTING:
New Orleans, present day. Well, let's say pre-Katrina to keep it simple.

STYLE:
The title is Outsmart because the characters are constantly lying and hiding things from each other. OR ARE THEY??? Everyone has his own agenda and probably doesn't want to reveal what that is. But somewhere, deep inside this story, there really is a coherent plot.

NOTE:
If you want to add to the story and wish to know a little more of what Jillian and I are planning, email me and I'll be glad to fill you in!

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