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Ask about the man and his 'resources'

Your intuition tells you to find any way out of this and take it, no matter what the cost. But immediately your instinct, your basic human survival response, reminds you of the chance that your unborn nephew could be affected by this. You won't know until many months from now whether he'll be normal or... not. As painful as it is, you begin to accept that there is, in fact, only one thing you can do right now... Try to find a cure for Cal. Perhaps in the end you can still have him put away, have him punished for all the vicious, cruel murders he's committed... especially if your father was one of them. But at the moment you have no choice but to help him.

You take a deep breath and sigh. "Alright, Cal. Who is this gentleman?"

Cal lowers his voice for the first time, and steps closer to you. "His name is Nicolas Dias. He studies all kinds of lore. He claims to have exorcised demons and destroyed witches. I don't know if he knows anything about my condition, but if anyone in Louisiana does, it's Dias."

"How do you know so much about him? And why can't you contact him yourself?"

"I've been watching him for a long time now. People like him are easy to spy on without getting too close. I've watched them all... 98% of them are complete frauds, but occasionally I find one I just can't dismiss. Dias is one of them. I belive he's the most likely to be able to help me, but there's a problem. The reason he's so caught up in all this is that he absolutely despises evil. He hates evil a lot more than he loves good. He'd much rather kill me than cure me."

"I see," you offer. "So... Have you any idea how I should go about getting information from him? Besides just telling him that I suspect someone and seeing if he tells me anything about the condition..."

"You'll have to use that sharp mind of yours, Edward. But be careful not to give him too much information or get him personally involved. The last thing I need is for Nicolas Dias himself to be hunting me." You stare at each other unblinkingly for the last few seconds that you're alone.

Gabrielle enters the room beaming, somehow smiling at each of you individually yet simultaneously. "Dinner is served," she declares, and turns around. You and Cal follow her into the dining room.

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "yessss... mmm... juicy"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for JJ1979 "Hey Rachel - your idea for conjoining branches: that was what I had in mind for my story Public Unlimited Company... feel free to add one!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for somebodysomeday83 "A short, but very powerful introduction Rachel! I like your style :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for somebodysomeday83 "I like how you've adapted your style Dr.Pinch. You've climbed into his mind-set and have moved the story on well."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for somebodysomeday83 "I enjoyed that Seldom. I liked the question you posed about the advantage of weakness. So true. You've portrayed the clashing of two intellectual-minds well I think, and I like the description!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for JJ1979 "Sorry! Wasn't my intention!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "oh good, now we know how to !*^* up the site while Nick is in Hawaii"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for JJ1979 "Evidently not."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "It doesn't catch "whore" though"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Swearing in comments on the site is fine (not encouraged, obviously, but as long as you don't go overboard I'm sure it's not gonna bother anyone.)

FWIW, it'll get bleeped out if people aren't logged in or if they have the profanity filter turned on. If they're logged in and have it disabled, they'll see it. (It's not the greatest filter, but it gets the obvious stuff.)
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for JJ1979 "Some talented-bast**ds (what is the protocol on casual swearing in comments on this sight?!) just make it look easy! It is truly a struggle."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for DrPinch "No one seemed to be taking the other road. Is it cool to start a new branch from the beginning even when one choice has 13 posts? What's the ettiquette there?"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "lol that would be a seriously awkward dinner..."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "Oh boy... If he said he was a killer first, then he must really be a monster, since he's not just using that as an excuse to not be called a killer. Hmm..."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "I'm starting to wonder about Gabrielle myself. : P"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for redhat "We lived in New Orleans until I was about four. They really did tell stories about the loup-garou... the wolf-man."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Ooh nice : ) This opens so many lovely possibilities.

I've already thought of where I'm going to take this but I won't be able to post it until a little later.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "Okay, I hope you like it! I still don't know whether Cal is telling the truth or just making stuff up..."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "This is a very complicated story; does Cal *really* want to get out of his 'dirty lifestyle' (whatever that may be), or is he only setting Edward up for failure to get him out of the picture? And what about Edward? What does he have up his sleeve?
Oooo the suspense!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Rac7hel "Oh good, I'm glad you named them. Good choices. ;)"

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