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...; margin: 0px;">Since it would be futile to express these doubts, you clear your throat and declare, "I understand, Cal. A friend of Gabrielle's is a friend of mine. Your secret is safe with me. Now... what do you mean, a cure for you? What is your ailment?"

Cal turns and walks towards the liquor trolley, but stops before he reaches it. He slowly starts pacing again, his hair barely shielding his eyes as they gaze at the floor. He sighs heavily and stops, his back to you, lifts his head and addresses the wall:

"It only happens when the moon is full. I lose myself... I become... a vicious, gruesome, boodthirsty... creature."

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Rac7hel CHARACTERS:
-- You (Edward) - a police officer in your mid-30's
-- Cal Beauchamp - a wealthy, respected 28-year-old businessman who you know to be a murderer.
-- Gabrielle - your 19-year-old sister who is engaged to Cal and recently pregnant.
-- Joseph - normal-looking 30-something-year-old guy who does Tarot readings on the street.
-- Old man - an old man who dresses like a gypsy and works on the street, saying creepy rude things to people for money.
-- Nicolas Dias - depends on who you ask.

SETTING:
New Orleans, present day. Well, let's say pre-Katrina to keep it simple.

STYLE:
The title is Outsmart because the characters are constantly lying and hiding things from each other. OR ARE THEY??? Everyone has his own agenda and probably doesn't want to reveal what that is. But somewhere, deep inside this story, there really is a coherent plot.

NOTE:
If you want to add to the story and wish to know a little more of what Jillian and I are planning, email me and I'll be glad to fill you in!

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