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...you are concerned about your sister, and of course I don't blame you. But I think there's more to it than you're admitting. My age is irrelevant. I think that you have some other reason to distrust me, and that is the subject that concerns me. You see, Edward, I know that you don't have proof of anything, and I assume that's what you seek. You want to confirm your suspicions about me, whatever they are.

But I... I seek something as well. Something that Gabrielle cannot give me. But you can give it to me. I need someone to confide in. I don't want to hurt Gabrielle; I want to illiminate my problem without her ever knowing of its existence. So, Edward. Here is my proposition. I will confirm whatever suspicions you may have about me, provided that you promise to tell no one, especially Gabrielle. And... you must promise to help me in any way you can.

Do you accept?"

Accept, and admit your suspicions

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Rac7hel CHARACTERS:
-- You (Edward) - a police officer in your mid-30's
-- Cal Beauchamp - a wealthy, respected 28-year-old businessman who you know to be a murderer.
-- Gabrielle - your 19-year-old sister who is engaged to Cal and recently pregnant.
-- Joseph - normal-looking 30-something-year-old guy who does Tarot readings on the street.
-- Old man - an old man who dresses like a gypsy and works on the street, saying creepy rude things to people for money.
-- Nicolas Dias - depends on who you ask.

SETTING:
New Orleans, present day. Well, let's say pre-Katrina to keep it simple.

STYLE:
The title is Outsmart because the characters are constantly lying and hiding things from each other. OR ARE THEY??? Everyone has his own agenda and probably doesn't want to reveal what that is. But somewhere, deep inside this story, there really is a coherent plot.

NOTE:
If you want to add to the story and wish to know a little more of what Jillian and I are planning, email me and I'll be glad to fill you in!

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