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There is a lot that has to come before this but this is a segment written (fleshed out) at the moment. Sorry for the way its presented.

The twins Memblazenor and Vedaso are not identical!!!

As the eldest of eight brothers Memblazenor seeks a remedy for his father king Vartranon as the old king is dying but the twin brother of Memblazenor Vedaso has had enough he leaves his home planet and takes over another species proclaims himself as their king and comes back to his city with only murde

EXT: CARHNAJLINA OUTLANDS

Action)
Memblazenor and Monfasar ride back quickly to the palace.

EXT: CARHNAJLINA'S CITY WALL'S

Action)
They both reach the city gates

Action)
The city is ablaze, smoke is billowing from almost every building

Action)
A dying soldier is slightly hanging over the top of the city gates walkway

Action)
He sees the Memblazenor and Monfasar through his smoke blinded eyes

Character) Carh-naj-liyhan soldier
Dialogue) (slowly dying) Your Highness the city has fallen... at the... hand of...

Action)
Soldier dies

Action)
They both dismount their Spedbolt's

Character) Monfasar
Dialogue) (Breathlessly) No!

Action)
Monfasar's gaze flit's from the burning palace to the other burning buildings within the city

Action)
Memblazenor gazes up at the dead soldier slumped on the gates walkway

Character) Memblazenor
Dialogue) No one needs to tell me who has done this, this is Vedaso's doing!

Action)
Memblazenor turns to the satchel upon his Spedbolt, he pulls from it a ring, he holds the ring in the palm of his hand and balls his fist

Character) Memblazenor
Dialogue) Monfasar... Monfasar (Monfasar is in absolute shock, not taking notice of anything else)

Action)
Monfasar turns from staring at the Inferno that is the citadel to face his friend

Character) Monfasar
Dialogue) The whole citadel is ablaze, all of your family are in the palace.

EXT: CARHNAJLINA'S CITADEL

Action)
A tall monument in the city crumbles and falls to the ground smashing to pieces

EXT: OUTSIDE THE CITADEL WALLS

Character) Monfasar
Dialogue) We would need an army to storm the city, two of us cannot do it alone. All we have are but mere weapons.

Character) Memblazenor
Dialogue) mere weapons, yes it is true, but you have your staff

Action)
Monfasar takes his staff from its compartment within the heart of the Carhniaelvesaur crest on his armour

Character) Monfasar
Dialogue) Yes I have my staff, but you, all you have is your Frq-Noi and Asii Blades, you would need the Staff of Shrainia to take on the Kadolan forces behind these walls

Action)
Monfasar takes a tight grip on his staff with both of his paw like hands, all of his four claws fly out quickly on each of his paws

Dialogue (cont'd)
We shall do it together, if we die today, we shall be forever remembered as having tried to take back what was yours.

Action)
A mechanical catapult flings massive pieces of building rubble over the wall, meant to hit Prince Memblazenor and Monfasa.

Action)
Monfasar aims his staff at the biggest piece of the inbound rubble.

Character) Monfasar
Dialogue) Nol-Kaladfey

Action)
The spell of fire erupts from Monfasar's staff, as the spell leaves the staff it kicks back into his shoulder

Action)
As the enchantment hits the massive piece of rubble it encases it in a ball of fire and it explodes in the air, blowing it to flaming smithereens

INT: LIYONHEARTZAAH THRONE ROOM

Action) Vedaso gazes through the window at the palaces north gate, he sees Monfasar launch an enchantment from his staff, it was aimed towards the gigantic rock that had been launched from a catapult behind the city walls.

Character) Vedaso
Dialogue) (shouts) NOOOOOOO, (Vedaso turns then punches the table), it is Monfasar, and that means that… Memblazenor is alive.... AAAAAAAAAARRHHH (Vedaso kicks over a table)

Character) Queen Vivianna
Dialogue) He will defeat you, he is strong just like his brothers and his father were

Action) Vedaso turns around slowly and menacingly, looking with a grin at his mother

Character) Vedaso
Dialogue) You claim he was strong, your husband was not so strong when I rammed an Asii blade through his chest

Action) Queen Vivianna slaps Vedaso round the face, several Kadolan soldiers run towards Vivianna.

Character) Vedaso
Dialogue) STOOOOOOP (Vedaso draws his sword)

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