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Acidic Recollection

 

you are gone

you walked away

as the sun went down

left me standing

in that taffeta gown

with the veil and the flowers

you surrendered to the powers

of vanity

it messed with your

insanity

the gravity

distorted

my perception

i can only see the stars

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