OK, so I wrote this story as a 'growing' project to develop the idea into a full length plot. Since I have figured out my master plan for this story and don't want to ruin the end, I am ending this here on this little cliffhanger.
If anyone read all this, I thank you from the bottom of my heart and appreciate the read (and critiques if you gave any). I hope you read my next draft. There will be three drafts in total. This is the rough, then the refined, and lastly the final that I will present to the editor.
Now, to flesh out my world and then write the next one!!!