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...d jumping through the open doorway, slamming the metal door shut he prays not one of these monsters would get to the door before the grenade exploded.

Boom! Shrapnel and body parts hit the door making the carriage shudder left to the right throwing Spear to the floor behind the door. The lights in Spear's carriage flicker, then silence, not a single sound, moan or groan.

"Washington, come in..... come in, over!" Spears quickly says down his radio whilst checking his magazine in his AK47.

"You injured Spear?" Washington calmly says, almost too calmly over the radio.

"No, but they're going to be in a bad state in First Class" replies Spear.

"Okay, get yourself out of there and rendezvous with Bradley at the Drop Zone by 0800, we're pulling out of there" says Washington with a sound of urgency now in his voice.

As Spear looks up from the floor his heart sinks he sees the carriage door handle slowly turning down.....

Trying to fit a new magazine to his AK47 Spear gets to his feet

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