The End....Or is it?


You're going to hate me for doing this I'm sure. But it's the only way to be sure that you see it.

I'm ending Muichimotsu.

Not too long after writing the previous chapter I lost all my data when my laptop broke. So I got depressed and didn't write for 2 years. Now that I've come back to my story I don't like parts of it so much.

I'm rewriting it. The characters are getting new looks and new names but their personalities will stay mostly the same. The setting has changed to Medieval Wales. But other than that it'll stay the same. If you want to get a feel for what they'll be like here are my character profiles:

Noriko has become Emilia Nybloom.
Hair Color: Strawberry Blonde
Hair Style: Elbow Length; Loose Curls; Messy Bangs
Eye Color: Green
Eye Style: Bright and Happy
Height: 5'3
Weight: 115#

Jizabel has become Thorne Sparrow.
Hair Color: Bleach Blonde
Hair Style: Tight Bob Cut
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 5'6
Weight: 165#

Elizerain has become Alisa Sparrow.
Hair Color: Bleach Blonde
Hair Style: Long curly and loose
Eye Color: White (Instead of having photosensitivity she's blind now.)

Hazel has become Eden Sparrow.
Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: Messy
Eye Color: Green

Jasper has become Elwyn Sparrow.
Hair Color: Bleach Blonde
Hair Style: Bowl Cut
Eye Color: Green

The End

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