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...d them on his bed. I kept what few items of his that I wanted.

The ramifications of Tripp’s disappearance didn’t effect me until about two weeks later, when the police pulled me out of class to question me. Though they never said I was a suspect, it was quite clear to me that I was being investigated. Of course, there was no evidence suggesting I was involved with either Amy’s or Tripp’s disappearance, so I was left alone. I was certain, however, that their eye was still fixed on me, so I decided not to mail any more letters to Mr. Ganf. And, to this day, I haven’t.

I’m confessing because I’m afraid. Maybe by telling the truth, I can set things right with whoever or whatever will decide my fate. I don’t know what will happen to me after I die, whether I’ll be judged by God or simply rot in the ground. Frankly, neither one of those sounds bad to me. I just hope Mr. Ganf won’t be there, waiting to take me away.

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Baffs "I really like this idea!
I do agree with Seldom that there is a lot of ideas packed into a very short piece.
I'm going to have a think about this while I'm at work and might try to add to it later.
I totally love the idea of a mass-murdering imaginary friend. genius.
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Rac7hel "I think it's awesome as a stand-alone piece. But at the same time it definitely leaves a lot of room for more story. Hmmmm...."
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Nosferatu_Man23 "No, I appreciate your honesty. Actually, I wrote this as a stand-alone piece, but I wanted to share it with other writers. I never intended it to be a story to be continued, though I wouldn't mind if anybody wrote more."
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seldom "Hey I like this!

Gave it a 4 rather than a 5 for these reasons:

I did get the feeling you tried to fit too much into the length, and also it had an ambiguity occasionally so I had to reread. I think this was associated with the number of ideas you were putting forward - so each idea was just given a brief mention and could be missed by a reader.

Otherwise it was great - love the ideas, the characters and the plot is full of possibilities - they were just presented so rapidly and close together is the only thing.

This is all just my opinion of course and of course ignore it if you want :)
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