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...the tiny dress
Closing my eyes, sat back, watched her revel in my bones
While tasting more of her
Gold eyes never left mine, blue as the sky, watching it set that dusk
Sent me back to my California days
While rocking back and forth
Celestial overtones took in the room.
                    Five hours later, after cresting the top of Mt. Popocatepetl
almost 10 times, I felt 80 dollars worth it.
She left the bed, like clocking out of work, that easy.

That night, Mexico felt grand.
Drunken gossip echoed outside the old fire-lit street.
                Her smell all around, I lit a cigarette and watched the fireworks
                            Fade into the starry, sunless night.

mexicali bluesmature

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