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...orysko thought. 'Drakon dead and me miles from shelter without food, sword or even a bow to hunt food with.'

He'd lost his bearings in his mad dash through the forest and wasn't entirely sure which way to head to get back home. There was also the question of Drakon's poor mangled body. As he looked at the young mage again he did a quick double take. Fooled by the dim light in the forest and his own fears what he now saw was Drakon's blood-soaked and torn silver robes, wrapped around a sack of straw. Obviously a short term spell had run it's course revealing the true nature of the "corpse"

The boy was still out there... possibly naked, but hopefully not. He had two options, downhill or up - which way would the accident prone trainee mage gone? The stupid kid was useless at magic - but his father was a fair woodsman, he'd head downhill hoping for a stream. Borysko was torn, almost as much as Drakon's robe - return home as best he could, or continue his search?

Borysko gives up on the boy Mage and tries to find his way home through the darkening forest

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Editorial Note
Bolsheviki "I was just wondering what our Madame's animal would be. Something appropriate, it must be. Something...unassuming, yet powerful. =o
A magpie. Although that may just be a product of my slight obsession with them. They are meant to be cursed birds, so perhaps that is not so appropriate. xD
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Bolsheviki "You're so kind, making excuses for me forgetting plot points. xD"
Tips & Advice
Burndtree ""Nice nice boots-eye view of things.
But...but...but...Steiffa also brought a vial of the silvering for Madame...;)for a shapechanger's getaway, perhaps, after the aspirin...er, green willow soothes away the pain from all that nasty Scarlet torturing."
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Bolsheviki "Ah, the world of smilies, which I already use far far too much. =D
See?

A not-so-noble wolf, aha. I shall have to be firm with him. I think a missing arm should do it, eventually. -evil cackle-
Aw, teddy bears. <3 I like her already. =D
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Bolsheviki "You have to be careful of wardrobes, you know. =3 You never know what might be lurking in the back of them. =o It could be /anything/...
Thank you for your advice on the keeping of miniature Masters. It's so hard to find books on the subject. -shakes head- Of course, I will be certain to provide him with many distractions in the form of hamster wheels and perhaps some mirrors and a cuttlefish? or is that for budgies? Still, it should keep his teeth in good condition, a necessary thing for a teeny Time Lord.

Hah. x3 Now I'm getting worried that they might not actually be regenerating him. After all, surely they would have advertised the bejeezus out of it...
If they play fast and loose with regeneration I shall have to hunt them down and eat them.
With chips.
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Burndtree "Oh, the Doctor would have to catch me before he could put me off his Tardis. I might stowaway in any of her possibly infinite rooms. She is much bigger on the inside, etc. Hide in a big old dresser, perhaps. Mmmaybe not – distinctly heard something at the back of that old dresser, like clashings of steel, and a cat far far bigger and noisier than our troublesome Khoreia.
Ah, but can anyone ever contain the universe conquering ambitions even of a mini-Master? Well, yes, perhaps if he burns off some excess energy running that hamster wheel. And keeping him on a healthful diet should help things, and other sentient folk. Just not tooooo much cake for the mini-Master, because the sugar-high will render the little tyrant truly unmanageable.
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I’m…too much in shock to speak on this regeneration drama awaiting lucky You this coming Saturday night – which I’ll not see first-hand for all of one more year…if the 4th season isn’t entirely pre-empted by CBC Golf, of course! No more Davie Tennant?...
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Bolsheviki "You're too kind. n_n You write well too! I always enjoy your branches. =3
Do you think the Doctor would mind you hijacking his TARDIS? x3
Still, he might not be in any shape to bicker, 'cause in Saturday's episode he began to regenerate. BUT THEY HAVEN'T TOLD US WHO INTO.
...Sorry, but it's making me twitchy. x3

I've become fond of the sergeant. xD -pets him- I shall keep him in a hamster cage with my miniature Master.
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Burndtree "You’ve just finished your school year – not been lax – only stretching now, re’laxing, that’s all. Because it’s summer! – and a long time coming, too. You might do Anything…before those back to school sales beckon at August end.
And you don’t write rubbish.
If only I had your skills when I was young.
Y’know…there is a way. Hijack the next roadside blue box I find. Go back. Hand over this thick sheaf, this Mage Hunting, and teach young me a thing or two.
…uhhh, I prob’ly won’t listen to me…remembering I thought I knew it all.
Nicely done with that Sergeant, too. I’d also figured he might aid our band of adventurers: Bory’s old army buddy from the wars, maybe. But your sergeant’s logic is perfect.
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Bolsheviki "You need not worry about the Sergeant's loyalty. xD
His name means 'divine bear', so he must be a goody. =3

I am becoming inexcusably lax in updating this story. xD I will try and be better about it, although I assume you'd prefer a slow, good branch to a quick, rubbish branch...
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Bolsheviki "...I can imagine Khoreia getting very annoyed with that captain. But indeed a happy ending could be on the cards...for someone. xP I rather like that captain actually.

Clever GoogleAdSense.x3
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Burndtree "You did it nicely, both directions.
I feel bad...
Yaa, the ambush WAS actually Calla rustling the bushes one side, Urska crashing thru them along the other, Bory snatching Drakon to safety whilst soldiers spin about. Even Khoreia wondering if it might be Vagari hunters.
I'm realizing you might have had it better.
No, no real ambush. Still, squads head out, ready to do battle. Bewitched Captain fires on his own, unrecognized in the trees. They, fired upon, in confusion logical during combat, return fire. We've seen enuf real world examples, eh?
Ewurghhh [as in feeling dread, and shuddering a bit]...lovesick captain's gotta eventually catch up with the light of his life, doesn't he? Khoreia, embittered by memory and hate, could be redeemed by love, couldn't she? And ironically by her badly handled spell that accidentally poses this opportunity before her, roses and chocs in his hand. But hate does nasty nasty things to a heart. And soldier-boy's been so...so dying to find his love again. Bad bad Khoreia!
...Ooo, kinda neat...GoogleAdsense is running Dr Who ads along this page (because of our posts).
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Bolsheviki "-salutes- Duly edited; thanks for telling me. It's probably my fault for not reading it properly. x3

Well, she is a prisoner-how else can she get her amusement? xDDD
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Bolsheviki "I know; I saw the original on the big BBC Children in Need show. =3 One of the bonuses of living in the country I do. There was another one just after Christopher Eccleston regenerated into Tennant...also Children in Need.
I only watch that big show if they have a Doctor Who special. xDDD
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Burndtree "Also, just discovered Canada was cheated of Time Crash and Voyage of the Damned from the '07 Dr Who season! I'm gonna hike in from the great Canadian wilderness, place an order at the first Hudson's Bay trading post for one '07 season DVD box-set...also some flour, sugar, raisins, blackpowder...
If you go to www.bbc.co.uk/doctorwho/episodes/2007 - call up the page for Time Crash - with Peter Davison AND Davie Tennant - which I didn't get t'see! - you'll see in the upper left corner the Tardis and a bandaged teddy bear alongside her. A BBC call for donations for children in need.
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Bolsheviki "Awww, you poor Canadians. Dx Doctor Who usurped by golf? The only thing that usurped it here was the Eurovision Song Contest-which is incredibly stupid and we /always/ lose.
I'm quite glad I happen to live in the country where the Doctor was first created. xD
You can get Doctor Who in HMV, I believe...
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Burndtree "Dr Who for your birthday - You're sooo lucky to be on the right side of the Atlantic! Here, in Canada, CBC likely will broadcast the current season of Dr Who - when they're good and ready - pre-empting it whenever...say, for Golf! You can prob'ly stock up on die-cast Dalek miniatures, on a whim!"
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Bolsheviki "-gasp- A bear terrorised Kilt Boy?
...That'd be Jamie. I gave many of the Doctor's companions nicknames. Rose, for example, is Pinky; The pair of them add up to Pinky and the Brain. =D
Jamie is Kilt Boy for obvious reasons; he wears a kilt. And very good he looks in it too.
I want to watch that episode now. Must ask for Doctor Who for my birthday.
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Burndtree "1967, it would seem..."The Ice Warriors: Episode 5". A scene with an actual live bear terrorizing Patrick Troughton's pair of companions.
And one of those books: "Toy Soldiers". Aliens, disguised as walking-talking teddy bears, kidnap earth kiddies, use 'em as soldiers in a very distant and bleak war.
Don't you just love Google? Wish it were around when I was in school!
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Bolsheviki "Good grief, the concidences just pile up! Obviously bears are important here. We shall have to continue with the naming conventions or THE FATES SHALL BE ANGRY.
...-cough- Sorry.
Jon Pertwee was an awesome Doctor, I have to say. I didn't like him at first but I became fond of him later. x3
Although I must say I can't think of a Doctor Who episode involving bears. Tsk.
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Burndtree "Exams do come first. Then play. You never have to apologize.
But, a little play now. Momentarily idle-me recalling a particular shire reeve named Hugh Beringar, from a tv adaptation of Cadfael. Likeable fellow played by Sean Pertwee, son of Jon Pertwee, the third Doctor Who. Quick googling about reveals exactly what I’d hoped for: more Bear’ness! Sean, in 2004, in A Bear’s Christmas Tale (un-house-trained bear amok in suburbia). And, according to IMDB, Jon as a boy played with the son of one gamekeeper, one AA Milne…um…of Winnie the Pooh fame.
Haarhaarrr!
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Dyverse "Thanx Burndtree, didnt copy and paste it it, so I guess its re-write time!!! lol."
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