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Weathering the Storm

The walls of reality were crumbling, and Samir knew he wasn't enough to stop it from happening.  He was barely enough to stop it from devouring him.  And that's what the Leapers wanted.  They consumed mens' dreams, trying to gather enough energy to push through to the waking world. 

In the first dream Samir had had of them, he'd been at the cottage on Lake Eerie.  He was alone, relaxing on a wood-slatted recliner and savoring the taste of one-hundred-year old brandy as the sun descended in one of his favorite sunsets--a blaze of September reds and oranges he'd recalled from his childhood.

A woman had emerged, unbidden, from the water, and approached him.   She'd been full-bodied and naked, but trailed motes of darkness.  He'd thought her a stray-thought or perhaps a lead-up to a dream of nocturnal-emissions, but when she'd clamped her hand to his shoulder with no small force, and lowered her head so her eyes met his, he knew he hadn't dreamt her.

"Wake up, damn it."  She said, her voice a gravelly command.  Her grip strengthened, until it became painful.  "They followed me through.  Wake up or we're both dead!"

And he'd woken, then, with a start. The pillow was moist and the blanket twisted at the foot of his bed.  He'd been thrashing in his sleep.  He rose and stumbled towards the desk, hoping to capture the details of the dream before the details fled.  But the desk drawer was open and his dream-journal was already lying open on the desk.

There was a new entry in a shaky hand with only one word: "Malandanti."

Since then, he'd fought the Leapers every night.  They came whenever he started to doze off.  In the two weeks he'd learned of them, he'd even begun seeing them during the day.   They fed on his dreams, his creativity.  And at night, those Leapers that had made it across into the waking world... they craved more physical sustenance.  Blood, mostly.

Waiting, staring at the now-bare walls, he felt himself nod off, the constricted air-flow in the room lulling him to a sense of exhaustion. 

Another mote of darkness formed, thickening noticeably around the middle, extending two shapeless tentacles towards him.  This one didn't seem to have a head.  It jumped forward, and Samir drew the crossbow up again, lodging it against his shoulder as he pressed the release, hitting it full in the chest, it writhed for a moment before remaining still.

This one left a stronger smell behind, scorched hair.  It had gotten further along to giving itself a physical form.  That meant he was starting to slip.  The long minutes to daylight clawed at him, enticing him to lay down his burden, to rest, to surrender...

The woman had not appeared again, though he'd tried calling to her often.  He'd tried recreating the setting in which she'd appeared, but it seemed lackluster, somehow a pale replica of itself.  And every time he recreated the scene, the shadows that formed weren't hers, but instead, the shapeless black of the Malandanti slowly taking form to prepare for the leap to the physical world...

He needed help. 

Samir knew he was losing the battle. 

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Monkette "I have been checking out some of your stories and this one has grabbed my attention the most so far. Not had chance to read the other chapters yet but looking forward to it. Very cool writing!"
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JJ1979 "Loving this site btw... I'll probably be less prolific once I'm off the couch (Knee-operation) but it'll definitely remain my favourite site - Thanks!"
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JJ1979 "A kickboxing warrior-rat! Brian Jacques meets Bruce Lee! Love it!"
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surreal78 "Guess he could morph into a giant rat-warrior just as easily as a wolf, then. :)"
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JJ1979 "I found this exerpt from the Wikipedia piece interesting
'...On Thursdays during the Ember days, periods of fasting for the Catholic Church, the Benandanti claimed their spirits would leave their bodies at night in the form of small animals (wolves, butterflies and rats in the Friuli).'
So the warrior need not take the form of the wolf...
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DrPinch "Felt a little bad for rating this chapter down a little, as it is very creative and the plot development is striking... it just seemed a little more contrived and in too much of a rush compared to the two either side of it.

Can't wait to see who tackles "The Battle" though - been a few days, is everyone too scared of it...?
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somebodysomeday83 "You have a vast knowledge of vocabulary Nick, I'm impressed. A word which has been thrown around lately springs to mind: 'intense'. Intriguing!"
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surreal78 "Okay, I probably won't be adding to this until I get back next week, if someone else wants to contribute, be my guest. I know the battle scene might be a bit daunting.

jait, wanna take a shot at it? :)
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SplashofFire "The flow is fantastic! I will be eagerly awaiting the following chapters. My one question is...what brought on this wrought example of humanity?"
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seldom "Definitely impressed by the style of all three chapters so far - like the darkness and bleakness, juxtaposed with those vivid childhood memories - the red September sunset. Really visual and well-described.

Not fond of this sub-genre but you're doing a good job changing my mind ;-)
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surreal78 "If jait doesn't write it, I'll put something up soon. :)"
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Taylos "I like this story alot. I want to jump in but I'm not sure I want my first post to be the battle."
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REDFOX "i love this so far, its really good. i love the whole werewolf genre, it was an unexpected development though, but i like the whole progression, he needed something/someone to happen to him to help him out. i like the whole, hidden secret within that he doesn't know about.

Great writing, good detail and description. =]

- RF
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Amo1143 "I love this! Some of my family comes from Modena, Italy, so I found it particularly fascinating. Great writing guys!"
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jait "Works for me.

I'm sure I'll add something soon... This story is right down my alley!
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surreal78 "I'm working under the assumption that he's absorbing this information from dreams and isn't really aware of what he's dealing with.

As an aside, the werewolf transformation is supposed to have been the first time it's happening to him, rather late in life (I put him at 40ish.) It's one of those needs-based things where thus far in life he hasn't been required to do anything, but his calling came late... so he's kinda screwed in that sense. :)
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jait "Oh, certainly... the terminology we're using is from the Italian... but where Samir got it? From a hastily-scrawled dream-writing... Possibly the woman in his dream, chased by the shadows...

I like the idea of a modern-day supernatural conspiracy of shadow-fighters...
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surreal78 "Yeah, I noticed that while reading about it. The notion is pretty widespread, but I believe the specific terminology we're using here is specific to the Italian sects, is it not? Not a big deal either way."
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jait "They needn't necessarily be Italian. It's only the Italian sect--the Benandanti--who were documented (by virtue? of the Holy Roman Inquisition)... Most cultures have some sort of lore about Dreams, Dream-sharing and Dream-walking... Though, the idea of the spirits from the dream-world crossing over to the physical world... that's new."
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surreal78 "I tried to stick with the lore. Admittedly I'm not an expert, but from what I was reading on a couple of sites about the two opposing factions, I think this works as a modern-day followup. Even if Samir may no longer be obviously of Italian descent... the bloodline is in him. :)

(Also plays into the whole werewolf familial/bloodlines concept.)

Actually.. that just gave me an idea. But I'll save it for later in the story. :)
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intoalkaseltzer "This is quickly becoming my favourite story on this site. I love it. I love that it has become a modern day take on such ancient and interesting lore."
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surreal78 "Okay, will write something in this one tonight. After I get the couple of bugs worked out that seem to have cropped up in posting since that 140-character debacle. :)"
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jait "BWAH-HAHAHA! I totally missed that."
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redhat "I like it, except for 'dream of nocturnal emissions' followed so closely by waking with a moist pillow... I'm sure it wasn't intentional, just an unfortunate juxtaposition."
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surreal78 "Just reading on Wikipedia about the Benandanti / Malandanti -- excellent foundation. Wasn't my original idea at all, obviously (although I had forgotten a good 2/3 of my dream by the end of the day), but I really like it, and I think can work my story concepts into that framework, maybe a modern-day interpretation / continuation of the lore...

I'll do a little research (looks interesting... I love this kind of lore) and write something tomorrow after my Protagonize presentation (see blog.)

Hell, maybe I'll write something tonight and post it during my demo. Better than posting crap and deleting it after. :)
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jait "Oh, and I named the protagonist "Samir" because it apparently means "Companion in evening talk" in Arabic..."
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jait "Obviously, the story reminds me a fair bit of the Benandanti / Malandanti stories... the basis for one of my creative projects... So, I've written a chapter to that effect. Hope you don't mind... I don't think it fundamentally changes anything in the story root.

Benandanti reference from Wikipedia:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benandanti
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Nosferatu_Man23 "This is interesting. It leaves much to the imagination, which I'm particularly fond of. You definitely gave it a dream-like quality while anchoring it somewhat in the real world. Bravo!"
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jait "Fantastic. You start out creating tension right off the bat, and a desire to read more... I've always had a bent towards the supernatural... and that certainly seemed out of the ordinary. I'll probably jump in on this one eventually..."
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Writers_Block "Wholey Nick, what were you poppin before you went to sleep! I think thats a good idea though I should start writing about what I dream about, I have some pretty &*$%ed up dreams! Excellent story...sorry I had to re-write this comment, I noticed it let my swear through haha...didn't think you'd appreciate that"
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surreal78 "Inspired by a nightmare I had last night. >:|"

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