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...d taught him would bring instant death.

He saw then, that Chaka was facing him, her head dangling down from the mouth of the beast, her eyes piercing his, pleading for him to come save her. He smiled and saw the relief in her eyes before he let loose the spear. He watched it, willing to hit the spot, to kill the animal. And then ‘whwaap’ it hit home. The animal crumpled in a heap to the floor. Dead. He ran up to it, Chaka was trying with one hand to lift the heavy head to free herself. He bent to her and held her head. The others ran up and started jumping, shouting and hitting themselves on the head with joy. They came to the head and helped Grok lift it so that he could free Chaka. As he lifted her into his arms she clasped both her arms around his neck in a grip so tight he was sure she would break him.

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