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...our pocket, you put the pipe to your lips.... and take a look around you. Urgency dissipates for just a second: You're in control here; you decide when to suck that sickly-sweet goodness down into your lungs. You're the one co-ordinating the delivery of that power to your epicentre - and in your capable hands the logistics are so simple! A simple suck -  flame to pipe - hitting your lungs, expanding outwards; power resonating throughout your body; blood vessels twitching; muscles awakening: King-Kong 'aint got Sh*t on me! I'm Rick James B*tch!

But enough with the hubris... it's time to do this! Yeah, baby, I've still got it, I can still rhyme like a motherf**ker, there is no other! Flame-to-pipe,the rocks vanish, with not-even-the-faintest whisp of smoke spared from those hungry lungs. Sucking it down to the depths, the aureolia flatten as you mind fattens then contracts into a pinpoint... and suddenly you're inside.  

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nickb You know all that irritating bulk mail you have to dig through to reach your bills and court summons every day? I was picking up my mail one morning and thought about what would happen if I actually followed the directions inside of one of those blasted things.

As an aside, let's try and keep at least one "avoidance" thread going as long as possible, even if it forks this way and that. I'd love to see how many different ways our protagonist can avoid following the suggestion of the award notice. It's good for comic relief. :)

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