Keira                    ‘Valet words'       Part 1

We stomped off in opposite directions, both ways leading out of the park...

I passed the tree were we had our first kiss... I walked under the street lamp where you first my wrapped your arms around me...

I get to my wall where you sat waiting for me on our first date together... I slammed the front door shut...I ran up to my bedroom and slammed that door shut...mum and dad are sorting their divorce out...you should be with me...

Cudgelling up together on the sofa watching films...fighting over the last sweet in the packet...laughing together...fingers linked together under the blanket across our legs...

Telling me everything going to be ok...and that your always be their for me...no matter what happens...you promised me...

I turn on my iPod speakers and let the music flow around my room...the music travels through my body releasing me from your voice...

The next night my best mates drag me out of my room...I put my thin strap midnight blue dress on...and I went to the local town Christmas ball...with my friends...but we weren't the only once going...

 I'm watching my friends dancing with their boyfriends...that should be me and you...with your hands around my waist...I can't take this anymore... I run out of the building into the gardens...I finally stop and drop down to the grass by the lake...

Why won't the tears come down from my face? I can feel the pain in my heart but I don't understand... 

And then I see my reflection in the water...I shouldn't be feeling like this...I shouldn't be like this...as I look closely in the water I see the real me for the first time...

There's a noise in the distance...I get up slowly...turn around...and your there looking for me...why have you ran after me?...The night covers me so you cant see me...carefully I walk backwards...

Suddenly I'm fighting for my life...in the freezing water...I'm getting tried...should I just let the darkness of the water take me? ...I close my eyes I'll let fate decide of my destiny...

After all what's the point anyway...my parents don't care about me...specially since  there getting a divorce...all they care about it hurting each other...I'm just an object to them...a prize...who ever wins me gets the lot...the house...the car...the money...and who ever wins I know what they're do with me...stick me in some boarding school...away from my friends...the place that I know and love...and the person that I love...

I finally stop kicking in the freezing water...I feel the something inside me telling me to open my eyes... as I opened my eyes I look straight ahead...there's a bright  light...What was it? Was I dreaming? Was I dead?

"Close your eyes and think of me" The voice I didn't recognizing was telling me...'think of me'? "Do as I say my sweet one and some day, I will come to you again". The voice I didn't recognize was seductive and inviting I wanted to think about him...if only I know who and more importantly what was it? "My sweet one all will be reviled to you". His voice was like valet. His voice flowed around my head, around my body. When? Why cant you tell me now, have I died? "My sweet one, I have told you all will be reviled, you're questioned answered. But for now just close your eyes and think of me..."

The light was drawing a picture in the water...what was it?...Then the light turned from, red, blue, sliver. What did it mean and where did the picture go... my eyes were shutting again but before they did I heard his voice again "Do not look for the light in the darkness, as it will find you"...

My eyes closed, my ears where still listening to his voice...what did he mean? ‘Do not look for the light in the darkness? It made no sense, none of this did...'all will be reviled'...his voice, that seductive, valet inviting voice. How could I not help think about him...If only I could have seen him, I could only imagine what a voice like that would look like...

I suddenly felt something warm on my lips, on my body; in my heart...I tried to open my eyes...but something deep down was telling me to keep them shut... I obey at once...not knowing what it was...instead I thought about him...as I thought about him something inside me was burning...the burning travelling down to my right wrist...I could feel it moving around and around... it left and the pain of the burning only lasted a second before it was gone...

 "Keira, can you hear me"?" O' Keira babes please, for me, please." ..."Keira"

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Started as a poem but ended up beign a story. As ever there has to be a goodies side and a Badies side as one of the characters Jamie points out to her. This story is pretty much of the top of my head. And the chapters also seem to be getting longer.
You got to have the vampire gene from at listed one of your vampire parents. The vampire gene doesn't really affect you until your coming up for 18. You start to change at the age of 16 1/2. You also have family jewellery, each piece of jewellery is different and they all have either a twist or curl or a swill in the designs.More character's info still to come

Name: Keira Amelia La estrella
Age: 16 nearly 17
Looks: Dark brown shiny straight hair, halfway down her back. Slim body but with some curves. Pale-ish, semi cold skinned. Normal eye colour dark brown eyes. But can change when using powers: turquoise, violate, light gray and then golden before returning back to dark brown.
Mark/tattoo: Right wrist. Purple flower with a twisted stem. Keira mark is a rear and not many have purple.
Info: Keira makes the choice to be a ‘good’ vampire. She has dreams that seem more real then they really should be. Keira also has strong abilities that grow as the story goes. Her real parents were some of the most powerful vampires around, until something happened to them.Family jewellery- Crystal star necklace on a thin sliver chain the star pendant falls just below her throat

Name: Lottie/ Charlotte.
Age: 17
Looks: Blonde shoulder length curly hair. Small, slim. Pale skinned. Shiny green eyes normally. Change to a dark pink colour. Powers unknown so far…
Mark/tattoo: Right ankle. Two curls that cross over each other, where they cross over there is a tiny diamond. Sliver coloured.
Info: Lottie has a twin brother called Jamie who is with her in the story. There parents (both vampires) are away most of the time. Family jewellery-left wrist. The bracelet has diamond is on her right ankle, but it also had two clear beads opposite each other on the chain.

Name: Jamie/James
Age: 17
Looks: Blonde curly hair just below neckline. Muscle built tall. Pale skinned. Shiny green eyes normally. Change to a teal blue. Powers, he able to sense when other people around him are in danger. The close he is with someone the easier it is from him.
Mark/tattoo: Left ankle. A big swill with a diamond in the middle. Sliver coloured.
Info: Jamie has twin sister called Lottie. For some reason Keira can pick up on Jamie’s thought only sometimes.Family jewellery- Silver ring with the diamond in it, worn on right hand

Name: Alex/Alexander
Age: 17
Looks: Dark brown hair short, fringe slightly longer on left side, just above left eyebrow. Tall strong muscle built. Pale skinned. Midnight blue eyes normally. Change golden. Powers, so far unknown…
Mark/tattoo: In-between his shoulder blades. Two swills going up, in the middle a moon crescent. Red.
Info: Alex had a interesting up bring his father was a vampire and his mother a human. His mother died giving birth to him.Family jewellery- long sliver chain necklace flat pendant with a crescent moon in the middle, pendant comes to the middle of chest.

updated Apr 30 '10 by Fitzy