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...at the boy he had beaten mercilessly for more then five years.

Billy stared dumb at his father as the energy screwed itself into his stomach, bits of flesh ground and minced squelched to the floor wetly and a metallic tang tinted the air, his father gurgled, trying in earnest to scream but unable to purchase any air, his eyes glassed over as he died from the shock, the entity carried on grinding, pulling his viscera out of his body in wet clumps of red, yellow and white and tossing them on the floor like trash.

"Stop it, stop it! Just stop it!" Billy whispered his mind broken as the entity circeled the room, its energy crackling, it's blood lust bubbling loudly.

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