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Cigarettes and Alcohol

Leaning back in his unfathomably expensive recliner, visage drenched in shadow, his hollow laugh rang out in the lavishly decorated room. His finely tailored Italian silk suit creased in just the right spots as he reached for an ashtray and tapped the ash from the tip of his cigarette. His other hand cradled a crystal snifter of hors d'age brandy.

In this day and age, he thought to himself, cigarettes are a luxury few can afford. This was primarily because they had been discontinued several years back, after succumbing to decades of cancer-fighters and healthcare lobbyists working against big tobacco. The consortiums behind the tobacco companies had quietly packed up shop and moved on to what was now considered bigger fish: designer drugs. They had no qualms about leaving the industry they had built their empires on, so long as something new was fashionable enough to replace it... and profitable.

His black market sources had gone to extreme lengths to dig him up a couple of cartons of his old favourites, Rothmans. They'd cost a pretty penny, several thousand credits for a carton, but damn it all, they were worth it. As was his current endeavour.

Still, he thought as he considered the cost of both the cigarettes and his present situation. They do relax these middle-aged bones after a... traumatic... kind of day.

The newssheet had flickered before his eyes moments ago, as the latest in retinal implants caught the updated headline. Bloody bodybroker got what was coming to him. Less of a mess in his trail, and once this Brozek character was eliminated, he'd be home free. Trust them to tie up loose ends. They always get their man.

All of the fine craftsmanship, expensive suits, and lavish office apparel in the world couldn't get him out of his current situation, mind you. As free as he felt of his previous life, he was still trapped by circumstances... and his would-be captors. For the time being, he was at their mercy. They wanted something only he could provide — he was but a means to an end. And he knew it.

He had one trick left up his sleeve, though, and if it came down to it, it may prove to be his only way out. But for the time being, he was happy enough to bide his time. Wait for the right moment. He'd know it when it came.

Cigarette in hand, Eli Trammel leaned back in his leather chair, puffed a ring of smoke, took a sip of brandy, and considered his options.

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Kooch "What I'm looking forward to is if I remember correctly, Aaron still has one item left that he pulled from his pocket. I thought that was a cool concept, I already used one of them though so I'm not touching the last one"
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somebodysomeday83 "Nice-work Nick, the one thing I'm myself wary of is writing fast-moving action scenes! You do it well :)"
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Kooch "Really like this! the man had to be behind it! As for the options he's considering at the end, I'm going to try and exercise one in the next chapter."
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surreal78 "Couldn't resist a little homage to Oasis in there, too. :p"
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Gaelythe "Looking forward to seeing what you bring to the story when you have time, Kooch. :)

I know what you mean about not having time. Finals week is coming for me, so I only stop in periodically to do a little reading when I need a break. No time to write these days!
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Gaelythe "Oh yes, VERY nice twist, Nick! I like it! :)"
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surreal78 "I'm feeling inspired. New chapter incoming. :)"
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Kooch "Haven't had time to read the newest chapter yet, I realize its been up for quite a while. But once I get a feel for the story again I'll add something."
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Kooch "Do you really want to limit yourself to just a couple?"
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Gaelythe "I was also thinking that there are hints of Running Man - more the book than the movie. Thankfully, this massive pastiche of themes is working so far!"
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surreal78 "Nice one, Gaelythe! I'll see if I can post a new chapter in the next day or two, that gave me some great material to work with. :)

This is turning into a crazy hybrid of The Fugitive, Terminator, Blade Runner, and Smokin' Aces... and potentially Minority Report. Let's see what else we can fit in here.. hehe.
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Kooch "Yeah man, there's definitely some of the Tremor brothers in there for sure."
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Kooch "He's a resourceful guy, I think he'll be okay. And I hope I didn't rough the Patchwork up too badly this early, but I think he'll be alright too."
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surreal78 "Do it! It's someone else's turn here, I wrote the last two branches.

Don't let this awesome story die. :D
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Kooch "This story has been sitting for almost a week now, perfect. Let me read it all again from the beginning and then I'll add something in the next day or two. Yeah, cuz I'm lazy."
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surreal78 "Hmm, might have to check that one out... thanks for the tip, Kooch."
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Kooch "Yeah, its a wicked book. He's got a bunch of other ones set in the same world. I've got 3 of them I think, but I've only read the one."
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Gaelythe "Hi, Kooch! I'll take your comment as a recommendation to read Altered Carbon. I'll have to try and dig up a copy.

And yes, please, come add a piece. Always happy to see more folks come out and play. :)
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Kooch "And I have to say, after reading the rest of the chapters, I was formulating something like your patchwork to throw in there! Well done, love the concept. Better than I was coming up with. I'll see what you guys do next and then maybe add a piece?"
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Kooch "This definitely reminds me of a book called Altered Carbon by Richard Morgan. That's not a bad thing either."
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lampoon123 "excellent!!"
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surreal78 "Awesome, Gaelythe! I'm going to have some fun with that Patchwork, I think. :)"
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Gaelythe "Gentlemen, these chapters are excellent, and so much better than I'd have done. Now I need to come up with a contribution that doesn't bring down the quality you've introduced here. :)"
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surreal78 "Okay, I couldn't resist. I figured I'd let Gaelythe flesh out the main plotline a bit while I took a stab at the daughter sub-plot. :)"
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Gaelythe "Ummm... homework... yeah... *looking over at pile of reading that's been put off in favor of Protagonize*

Homework? What homework?

Oh. That homework. *sigh*

;)
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calliope "Very neat. I might have to come up with something for this later on (after homework and such!)... I love the subplot of his daughter already."
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Gaelythe "I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with, Nick. I really enjoy your writing. :)

And the fascination for me in collaborative fiction is seeing which direction the next writer takes it. It's almost never where it would have gone if I wrote it all, so I'm always happy if someone wants to come play.
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surreal78 "This really is spectacular... I love the notion, very Blade Runner-esque.

I'll have to think long and hard to come up with something good, because I really want to add to this one. :)
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Gaelythe "Thanks, Juniper! I'm glad to know someone enjoys the concept. :)"
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juniper "oooh...love the concept of Joyride"

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