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Crossed Out

The thick beard, of which he'd been proud, was gone. They'd shaved it at the hospital so they could stitch closed the wound where his teeth had gone through his lip. His nose had been set, but a livid bruise spread outward from it. Matthew Cross glared at these reflected reminders in the bathroom mirror.

With a low growl, the bodybroker left off contemplating his reflection and left the bathroom and flung himself down on his bed. He'd only just gotten home from getting treated, and a better look at the damage did nothing to lighten his black mood.

The thing that angered him the most was that Aaron Brozek was never supposed to have survived long enough to get to Cross. There had been assurances. The broker remembered every word.

"Have you considered our proposal, Mr. Cross?"

"Yes. I even have a candidate in mind. But I need a promise."

"A promise? What promise is that?"

"That when the Joyride's over, he won't come looking for me."

"He will never have a chance to get close to you, Mr. Cross. NDS will offer a substantial reward for him, alive or dead. Most consumers will jump at the chance. And if he somehow evades the common citizens, there are the police. And, of course, the Patchworks. You need not fear for your safety where the lender is concerned. He'll never get anywhere near you."

So Cross agreed. He had Brozek in mind from the start. He knew that the man was desperate for money to save his daughter. Cross had heard about it until he was sick. It was all Aaron ever talked about when he came in looking for a new lending contract with a Joyrider. The fees Brozek collected were never enough to cure his brat, just enough to slow down the progress while waiting for a big enough windfall.

When Cross dangled the Joyride in front of Aaron a few days later, it was almost pathetic how fast the man jumped at it. The fee that the broker had dangled in front of Brozek would cure the brat once and for all, even with some left over.

And then Aaron signed what he thought was the insurance agreement on the contract. He'd been the lender in so many Joyrides that he never even read the contracts anymore. He never caught the fine print he signed his name to; the fine print that put all the fees directly into Cross's pocket, instead of the percentage that the broker usually took. That fine print had been the bodybroker's own inspiration. Once the man was dead, what use would he have for that money, after all? As for the daughter Brozek was always moaning about, well, them's the breaks.

Then the gutter trash showed up at the casino, reeking in filthy clothing. So much for assurances. Cross was never supposed to be touched. They owed him something more for what he'd been put through!

Cross swung his feet to the floor and sat up, scowling. Those two owed him compensation, that's what. It was only fair that they pay up for their breach of promise.

The broker stood and went to the videophone console. He dialled the number he'd been given, which went only to a v-mail. The message he left was simple and above suspicion, as it must be on this unsecured line. Cross simply asked for a call back to discuss details of a special Joyride contract.

Ten minutes later, the console signaled an incoming call requesting scramble and encryption. When Cross accepted the call, it was audio only. Nothing new in that.

"Yes, what is it?"

"What is it? I thought you said that I'd be safe. Do you know what that gutter trash you were supposed to put down did to me?"

"Cross, you picked him. Perhaps you should have found a lender who was less resourceful."

"What? Look here-"

"I can't look there. I do not choose to use video. Nor," with definite distaste coming through the secured line's voice distortion, "would I want to."

"Damn it, you owe me some compensation for this!" Cross balled his hands into fists, glaring at the dead black of the console screen.

"I would submit that you have been more than adequately compensated. Particularly with the fine print you chose to add to the contract."

For a moment, Cross was too angry to speak. Didn't they understand that they owed him? He'd set it up for them, he'd gotten hit for them, he was keeping his mouth shut for them...

Keeping his mouth shut. That was it. If they wouldn't make good on their breach of promise, then maybe he couldn't make good on his promises either. "I guess that's it, then." The broker put every ounce of resignation he could into his voice. "I guess I'll have to just accept that. But I keep thinking back to the look on Brozek's face at the casino. It keeps... tugging at me." Cross silently congratulated himself on his acting. He was quite good, really. Maybe he should have gone into film instead of brokering Joyrides. "I know he only attacked me out of desperation. This is going to wear on my conscience, I know it. I don't know if I'll be able to fight off the urge to go to the police and explain that it wasn't Brozek's fault. That he was lending for a Joyride."

A long pause followed Cross's little speech. Finally, "And I suppose you'd need some incentive to fight off this impending attack of conscience?"

"Well, it'd be hard, but for you, I could probably manage it. With, as you said, some incentive."

"This is something we should perhaps discuss face-to-face. I would prefer that the... incentive... not have any kind of trail that could be traced back. This incentive will need to be delivered in person."

The bodybroker grinned despite the way it tugged on the stitches in his bottom lip. Finally he was getting somewhere. "And where would you like to discuss further incentive?" He asked, thinking he could be generous - as he thought it - in victory.

"Your office is set up to give your Joyride clients privacy, correct? Only the lenders' entrance is under surveillance? Then I will meet you there in half an hour's time." With that the connection broke.

The foul mood now completely gone, Cross left for his closed office.

* * *

NEWSSHEET FLASH

Bodybroker Matthew Cross is missing and presumed dead. Police responded to reports of suspected vandalism at the broker's office. Witnesses reported sounds of breaking glass along with other sounds of possible destruction. The PD arrived to find the patron's entrance standing open, and obvious signs of a struggle in Cross's private office. An anonymous source inside local law enforcement told our reporter that a significant amount of blood was found at the scene and has been matched to Cross.

Cross was attacked earlier tonight at the Eden Hotel and Casino by Aaron Brozek, who is also linked to the murder of Eli Trammel. Our anonymous source says that Brozek is suspected of returning to finish the job he started at the casino.

With this latest attack, the price on Brozek's head has increased by another 5,000 credits. The suspect is considered to be extremely dangerous.

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Just Chatting
Kooch "What I'm looking forward to is if I remember correctly, Aaron still has one item left that he pulled from his pocket. I thought that was a cool concept, I already used one of them though so I'm not touching the last one"
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surreal78 "The truth to it is that *I* actually killed Cross, in the future. :o"
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Gaelythe "How do you know I killed Cross? He might be, he might not. There was no body found, only blood. That's for me to know and you to find out. Or, you know, someone else to write if they want to write something using either him or his death. I thought about it and decided to imply, but leave the possibility of survival open if someone wanted to take it that direction. ;)"
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somebodysomeday83 "Nice-work Nick, the one thing I'm myself wary of is writing fast-moving action scenes! You do it well :)"
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Kooch "you're crazy! you killed cross! he had such a cool name too!"
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Gaelythe "Looking forward to seeing what you bring to the story when you have time, Kooch. :)

I know what you mean about not having time. Finals week is coming for me, so I only stop in periodically to do a little reading when I need a break. No time to write these days!
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surreal78 "I'm feeling inspired. New chapter incoming. :)"
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Kooch "Haven't had time to read the newest chapter yet, I realize its been up for quite a while. But once I get a feel for the story again I'll add something."
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Kooch "Do you really want to limit yourself to just a couple?"
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Gaelythe "I was also thinking that there are hints of Running Man - more the book than the movie. Thankfully, this massive pastiche of themes is working so far!"
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surreal78 "Nice one, Gaelythe! I'll see if I can post a new chapter in the next day or two, that gave me some great material to work with. :)

This is turning into a crazy hybrid of The Fugitive, Terminator, Blade Runner, and Smokin' Aces... and potentially Minority Report. Let's see what else we can fit in here.. hehe.
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Kooch "Yeah man, there's definitely some of the Tremor brothers in there for sure."
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Kooch "He's a resourceful guy, I think he'll be okay. And I hope I didn't rough the Patchwork up too badly this early, but I think he'll be alright too."
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surreal78 "Do it! It's someone else's turn here, I wrote the last two branches.

Don't let this awesome story die. :D
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Kooch "This story has been sitting for almost a week now, perfect. Let me read it all again from the beginning and then I'll add something in the next day or two. Yeah, cuz I'm lazy."
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surreal78 "Hmm, might have to check that one out... thanks for the tip, Kooch."
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Kooch "Yeah, its a wicked book. He's got a bunch of other ones set in the same world. I've got 3 of them I think, but I've only read the one."
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Gaelythe "Hi, Kooch! I'll take your comment as a recommendation to read Altered Carbon. I'll have to try and dig up a copy.

And yes, please, come add a piece. Always happy to see more folks come out and play. :)
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Kooch "And I have to say, after reading the rest of the chapters, I was formulating something like your patchwork to throw in there! Well done, love the concept. Better than I was coming up with. I'll see what you guys do next and then maybe add a piece?"
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Kooch "This definitely reminds me of a book called Altered Carbon by Richard Morgan. That's not a bad thing either."
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lampoon123 "excellent!!"
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surreal78 "Awesome, Gaelythe! I'm going to have some fun with that Patchwork, I think. :)"
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Gaelythe "Gentlemen, these chapters are excellent, and so much better than I'd have done. Now I need to come up with a contribution that doesn't bring down the quality you've introduced here. :)"
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surreal78 "Okay, I couldn't resist. I figured I'd let Gaelythe flesh out the main plotline a bit while I took a stab at the daughter sub-plot. :)"
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Gaelythe "Ummm... homework... yeah... *looking over at pile of reading that's been put off in favor of Protagonize*

Homework? What homework?

Oh. That homework. *sigh*

;)
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calliope "Very neat. I might have to come up with something for this later on (after homework and such!)... I love the subplot of his daughter already."
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Gaelythe "I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with, Nick. I really enjoy your writing. :)

And the fascination for me in collaborative fiction is seeing which direction the next writer takes it. It's almost never where it would have gone if I wrote it all, so I'm always happy if someone wants to come play.
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surreal78 "This really is spectacular... I love the notion, very Blade Runner-esque.

I'll have to think long and hard to come up with something good, because I really want to add to this one. :)
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Gaelythe "Thanks, Juniper! I'm glad to know someone enjoys the concept. :)"
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juniper "oooh...love the concept of Joyride"

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