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Bedlam

Tyler Fuse and his two brothers, Myles and Kane, listened intently to the high tech police scanner mounted to the dashboard of Tyler's van.

"Suspect located in an alley off  the 300 block of Harbor Street in Downtown; two units responding, requesting backup."

Tyler smiled to his two brothers and took the next exit off the ten lane skyway into downtown. Kane, sitting next to him, loaded his sawed off shotgun and grinned back.

"That's right near the old fair grounds on the boardwalk." called Myles from the backseat.

"I know where it is." Tyler answered.

The three brothers had their heads shaved, Celtic warrior tattoos covering their muscular arms, faces and chests underneath tactical combat vests that hung with tools of their trade. They were the Fuse Brothers. They were bounty hunters, and this was their payday.

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As the first police officer moved past the garbage dumpster where Aaron crouched, handgun leading the way, Aaron lashed out with his makeshift club. The pipe cracked across the officer's gun hand, crushing the many small bones in his hand. A second swing took the man heavily in the chest, snapping ribs and sending the man backwards into the alley wall behind him.

The second cop opened fire on Aaron, the crack of his pistol deafening in the tight confines of the alley. The second shot hit Aaron in the shoulder, spinning him. Making use of the momentum he let the pipe lead the way into the cop's jaw, nearly tearing it free. The cop went down in a heap and lay motionless. Aaron hadn't intended to kill these men, he also hadn't intended to get himself shot. Careless. And as more running footsteps approached, he looked at the other injured officer at his feet who was crawling feebly towards his gun. Aaron ran.

It was an exhilarating feeling to say the least, to run that fast. Bullets snapped past his head for the first few seconds but then he was away, around the next bend in the narrow passage between buildings. He burst out of the alley and into the street and was stunned for a moment in his near delirious state. Looming in front of him was a huge Farris Wheel, with the ocean beyond. Recognition dawned on him, he had rode that Farris Wheel as a boy though now it lay in disarray with broken spokes and a grim shadow hanging over it. He crossed the street quickly and climbed the chain link fence to drop inside the abandoned fair ground. As his feet touched down to the wooden planks of the boardwalk a dizzying wave of exhaustion rolled over him and his injured shoulder began to ache, Aaron could feel his heartbeat in his shoulder and the slick wetness that ran down his arm. That was it, the stimpak had done its thing. It was a little disappointing.

His breath coming in ragged gasps, Aaron stumbled into the amusement park, police sirens closing in. He headed towards a concession stand and at the last moment thought better of it, hopping over the low wall around the bumper car rink and hunkering down with his back against the wall. Aaron looked around erratically at the shadowed and motionless bumper cars as he peeled the layers of clothing off his shoulder, first the filthy hoodie and his windbreaker and t-shirt beneath it. He took the second item from his pocket. It was a small packet, the size of  a wet-nap that some of the more old style resturants would give you with a plate of ribs. Tearing the cellulose packaging, Aaron unfolded the medi-strip and applied it to his gunshot wound. It would help with the wound and rejuvenate his body from the punishing effects of the stimpak. The self-adhesive coating on the strip adhered to his wound and the intoxicating cocktail of medicinal chemicals flooding him sent him spinning in dizzyness yet again.

He was brought to by the sound of the slide on a pump action sawed off shotgun being worked and the barrel of the weapon being pressed against his head from over the low wall.

"Gotcha." Kane Fuse grinned. "Guys! He's over here!" He shouted to his two brothers and didn't notice the dark shape of the Patchwork coming out of the concession stand behind him, impossibly fast.

The hunting knife sunk into Kane's back, drinking deeply of his blood. The Patchwork twisted the knife as Tyler and Myles screamed in rage and leveled their firearms and unleashed a spray of fire and hot lead. Myles' submachine gun peppered the area with 9mm rounds, several of the bullets hitting the Patchwork and even his own brother's body. Tyler's magnum boomed and the heavy bullet smashed into the inhuman killer and knocked it back. Releasing the knife, the Patchwork drew its machine pistol and returned fire, pinpoint accuracy delivering half a dozen hits to Myles' chest and stomach while Tyler dove behind cover. Tyler looked to his second fallen brother; Myles was not dead, but it wouldn't be wrong as the young man writhed on the ground, his life blood seeping from some many holes.

The police entered the fair ground from behind the Patchwork and unwittingly opened fire on the target. A shotgun blast took the Patchwork in the back. Something like a sigh of frustration passed through the Patchwork's lips as it resigned that the situation was out of hand. Retrieving the knife from the corpse of its first victim it retreated back into the fair grounds. It would have to reacquire its target.

In the ensuing chaos, Aaron had crawled through the bumper car rink and now hid behind the carousel on the other side, letting the medi-strip work its magic on him. He needed to make sure Ella was safe, but he couldn't return home for fear of leading these men there. He didn't know what to do.

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Kooch "What I'm looking forward to is if I remember correctly, Aaron still has one item left that he pulled from his pocket. I thought that was a cool concept, I already used one of them though so I'm not touching the last one"
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somebodysomeday83 "Nice-work Nick, the one thing I'm myself wary of is writing fast-moving action scenes! You do it well :)"
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Gaelythe "Looking forward to seeing what you bring to the story when you have time, Kooch. :)

I know what you mean about not having time. Finals week is coming for me, so I only stop in periodically to do a little reading when I need a break. No time to write these days!
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surreal78 "I'm feeling inspired. New chapter incoming. :)"
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Kooch "Haven't had time to read the newest chapter yet, I realize its been up for quite a while. But once I get a feel for the story again I'll add something."
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Kooch "Do you really want to limit yourself to just a couple?"
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Gaelythe "I was also thinking that there are hints of Running Man - more the book than the movie. Thankfully, this massive pastiche of themes is working so far!"
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surreal78 "Nice one, Gaelythe! I'll see if I can post a new chapter in the next day or two, that gave me some great material to work with. :)

This is turning into a crazy hybrid of The Fugitive, Terminator, Blade Runner, and Smokin' Aces... and potentially Minority Report. Let's see what else we can fit in here.. hehe.
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Kooch "Yeah man, there's definitely some of the Tremor brothers in there for sure."
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surreal78 "Kooch, have you seen Smokin' Aces? The three bounty hunter brothers totally reminded me of that movie. :)"
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Kooch "He's a resourceful guy, I think he'll be okay. And I hope I didn't rough the Patchwork up too badly this early, but I think he'll be alright too."
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Gaelythe "Nicely done, Kooch! It should be interesting trying to get Aaron out of the corner you've painted him into. I may have to take a stab at that next week when midterms are over. Unless, of course, someone else beats me to it."
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surreal78 "Do it! It's someone else's turn here, I wrote the last two branches.

Don't let this awesome story die. :D
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Kooch "This story has been sitting for almost a week now, perfect. Let me read it all again from the beginning and then I'll add something in the next day or two. Yeah, cuz I'm lazy."
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surreal78 "Hmm, might have to check that one out... thanks for the tip, Kooch."
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Kooch "Yeah, its a wicked book. He's got a bunch of other ones set in the same world. I've got 3 of them I think, but I've only read the one."
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Gaelythe "Hi, Kooch! I'll take your comment as a recommendation to read Altered Carbon. I'll have to try and dig up a copy.

And yes, please, come add a piece. Always happy to see more folks come out and play. :)
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Kooch "And I have to say, after reading the rest of the chapters, I was formulating something like your patchwork to throw in there! Well done, love the concept. Better than I was coming up with. I'll see what you guys do next and then maybe add a piece?"
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Kooch "This definitely reminds me of a book called Altered Carbon by Richard Morgan. That's not a bad thing either."
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lampoon123 "excellent!!"
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surreal78 "Awesome, Gaelythe! I'm going to have some fun with that Patchwork, I think. :)"
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Gaelythe "Gentlemen, these chapters are excellent, and so much better than I'd have done. Now I need to come up with a contribution that doesn't bring down the quality you've introduced here. :)"
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surreal78 "Okay, I couldn't resist. I figured I'd let Gaelythe flesh out the main plotline a bit while I took a stab at the daughter sub-plot. :)"
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Gaelythe "Ummm... homework... yeah... *looking over at pile of reading that's been put off in favor of Protagonize*

Homework? What homework?

Oh. That homework. *sigh*

;)
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calliope "Very neat. I might have to come up with something for this later on (after homework and such!)... I love the subplot of his daughter already."
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Gaelythe "I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with, Nick. I really enjoy your writing. :)

And the fascination for me in collaborative fiction is seeing which direction the next writer takes it. It's almost never where it would have gone if I wrote it all, so I'm always happy if someone wants to come play.
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surreal78 "This really is spectacular... I love the notion, very Blade Runner-esque.

I'll have to think long and hard to come up with something good, because I really want to add to this one. :)
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Gaelythe "Thanks, Juniper! I'm glad to know someone enjoys the concept. :)"
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juniper "oooh...love the concept of Joyride"

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