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Joyride

Two sets of three silvery disks, that was all it had taken to ruin Aaron's life. He knew he wasn't free of blame, not entirely. He'd known the risks. He'd needed the money to save his daughter, and the risks hadn't mattered.

Most Joyriders didn't usually do that much damage anyway. They leaped into the body they'd rented for an hour or a day and headed straight for a sexual encounter or their drug of choice. The Joyride let them feed their vices without consequence. Reputations (often vital in the Corporacracy) were undamaged, addiction and subsequent detox were avoided. At worst, Aaron had thought he'd have to kick a new habit or get treatment for an STD. He would be able to afford that, even after getting his daughter the medical attention she needed. Joyriders always paid well to indulge their tastes. But the taste this time was murder, and it had been Aaron's face the witnesses saw, his fingerprints and DNA all over the house.

He didn't even know who the bodybroker had rented him to. The broker never told him, and the afternoon of the Joyride was a blank in his memory. His consciousness was suspended during the Joyride from the moment the silver Consciousness Transferral disks were in place. It was only when he'd seen his own face blazing from one of the huge electronic billboard screens that he knew what his body had done in his absence. There it was, his image two stories high, interrupting the constant flow of advertisements that normally filled the screen. A crawl along the bottom of the screen gave him the details of his crime: murder of Chief Security Officer of Northern Data Systems. Reward offered for information leading to capture.

Aaron stood frozen, gaping at the EBS. This couldn't be real. He'd never heard of anyone dreaming while playing host for a Joyride, but what else could this be but a nightmare?

It was a nightmare. But it was also all too real.

"There he is!" someone shouted as the advertisements resumed. He looked down from the screen to see two burly men pushing through the crowded street to get to him. Shock kept him frozen a moment longer, and then he turned and began fighting through the crowd of pedestrians to get away.

Aaron dove through the first door he came to and raced along the narrow hall of a rundown apartment block. He found the stairs and ran up them three at a time as he heard his pursuers slam their way into the entry. He ran up four stories without slowing. The thudding footsteps of his pursuers fell behind.

The hallway he found himself in could have been the one he entered from the street. The same narrow passage, the same peeling paint and closed doors. He rattled knobs desperately as he searched for a hiding place. Finally, one turned in his hand and he ducked inside an abandoned apartment.

Even now, winded as he was, Aaron didn't stop. He ran across the apartment, threw open a window, and slipped out onto the fire escape. While the men from the street chased up the stairs, Aaron clattered down. The second story apartment was also empty. The window was locked, but it was the work of only a few moments to kick out a pane of glass, reach inside, and release the catch. Then he was inside and safe, at least for the moment.

Panting, Aaron collapsed on the floor. This thing was still unbelievable, but he had accepted that it actually was happening. As he slowly regained his breath, his mind chased round in circles, trying to find a way out. He knew the law wouldn't care that someone else had been looking out through his eyes. They would prosecute the case they could win, and all the evidence would point to him, because it had been his body. There would be nothing to prove that he was the host of a Joyride gone bad.

As he saw it, the only way he could prove his innocence in spite of his body's complicity was to somehow avoid capture and find proof against the actual killer. And the first step would be finding out who took him on the Joyride in the first place. The bodybroker might or might not know, but it was a place to start.

There was no other choice. The hunted would also have to be a hunter.

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "What I'm looking forward to is if I remember correctly, Aaron still has one item left that he pulled from his pocket. I thought that was a cool concept, I already used one of them though so I'm not touching the last one"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for somebodysomeday83 "Nice-work Nick, the one thing I'm myself wary of is writing fast-moving action scenes! You do it well :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "Looking forward to seeing what you bring to the story when you have time, Kooch. :)

I know what you mean about not having time. Finals week is coming for me, so I only stop in periodically to do a little reading when I need a break. No time to write these days!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "I'm feeling inspired. New chapter incoming. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "Haven't had time to read the newest chapter yet, I realize its been up for quite a while. But once I get a feel for the story again I'll add something."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "Do you really want to limit yourself to just a couple?"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "I was also thinking that there are hints of Running Man - more the book than the movie. Thankfully, this massive pastiche of themes is working so far!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Nice one, Gaelythe! I'll see if I can post a new chapter in the next day or two, that gave me some great material to work with. :)

This is turning into a crazy hybrid of The Fugitive, Terminator, Blade Runner, and Smokin' Aces... and potentially Minority Report. Let's see what else we can fit in here.. hehe.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "Yeah man, there's definitely some of the Tremor brothers in there for sure."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "He's a resourceful guy, I think he'll be okay. And I hope I didn't rough the Patchwork up too badly this early, but I think he'll be alright too."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Do it! It's someone else's turn here, I wrote the last two branches.

Don't let this awesome story die. :D
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "This story has been sitting for almost a week now, perfect. Let me read it all again from the beginning and then I'll add something in the next day or two. Yeah, cuz I'm lazy."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Hmm, might have to check that one out... thanks for the tip, Kooch."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "Yeah, its a wicked book. He's got a bunch of other ones set in the same world. I've got 3 of them I think, but I've only read the one."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "Hi, Kooch! I'll take your comment as a recommendation to read Altered Carbon. I'll have to try and dig up a copy.

And yes, please, come add a piece. Always happy to see more folks come out and play. :)
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "And I have to say, after reading the rest of the chapters, I was formulating something like your patchwork to throw in there! Well done, love the concept. Better than I was coming up with. I'll see what you guys do next and then maybe add a piece?"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Kooch "This definitely reminds me of a book called Altered Carbon by Richard Morgan. That's not a bad thing either."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for lampoon123 "excellent!!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Awesome, Gaelythe! I'm going to have some fun with that Patchwork, I think. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "Gentlemen, these chapters are excellent, and so much better than I'd have done. Now I need to come up with a contribution that doesn't bring down the quality you've introduced here. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Okay, I couldn't resist. I figured I'd let Gaelythe flesh out the main plotline a bit while I took a stab at the daughter sub-plot. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "Ummm... homework... yeah... *looking over at pile of reading that's been put off in favor of Protagonize*

Homework? What homework?

Oh. That homework. *sigh*

;)
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for calliope "Very neat. I might have to come up with something for this later on (after homework and such!)... I love the subplot of his daughter already."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with, Nick. I really enjoy your writing. :)

And the fascination for me in collaborative fiction is seeing which direction the next writer takes it. It's almost never where it would have gone if I wrote it all, so I'm always happy if someone wants to come play.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "This really is spectacular... I love the notion, very Blade Runner-esque.

I'll have to think long and hard to come up with something good, because I really want to add to this one. :)
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Gaelythe "Thanks, Juniper! I'm glad to know someone enjoys the concept. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for juniper "oooh...love the concept of Joyride"

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