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I just can't

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I just can’t

Cold
Cold
Freezing water
All around me
Sunlight just above my head
Air out of reach
Can’t swim
Can’t breathe
Darkness is enveloping me
Death is waiting
I struggle
Against the elements
I’m flailing
A devil lends me his hand
An angel lends me hers
I can’t breath
I can’t think
I can’t…

Can’t…

But this is what I want …

                                                 LCS

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