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Humanimal

For a moment, in the warm twilight between sleeping and waking, William had dignity. For a split second, he was comfortable and happy and he had all the rights that he used to enjoy back when-

"C'mon boys! Up 'n at 'em!"

William couldn't help himself. In an instant he was wide awake, jostling and lowing with the rest of his herd as he was driven out to grass.

How could he help himself when there was a chip in his brain that overrode his humananity and forced him into acting like a bullock?

Because William was a humanimal.

It was terrible, really, he mused, wandering with a bullock's absent-mindedness around a field, occasionally taking a mouthful of the grass that could only nourish him because of the augmentations they'd added to his digestive system. They took your brain and they implanted a chip in it and they made you act like an animal; but they left your higher brain functions. You could still think. You knew what was happening to you.

And that was why it was a punishment.

He could hardly remember what had led to his transformation. Could have been hardly anything. Now that the food shortages were so extreme, and so many animals were becoming extinct, most crimes led to humanimal transformations. If you were lucky, you became a pet animal, a cat or a dog or even a hamster; if you were slightly unluckier, you became a zoo animal, a lion or a penguin. If you were really, really, really unlucky you became a farm animal. Destined for the table.

William was going to be slaughtered, and he couldn't do a thing about it.

The knowledge rankled. There had to be something he could do. He felt like tearing off the false nose he had to wear, throwing away the false tail attached to his pants. They couldn't even be bothered to genetically edit your appearance; they used costumes. Costumes, for heaven's sake.

There had to be something he could do. Lead an uprising, or something...

But of course it wasn't as easy as that. He could see the same desire in the eyes of the rest of his herd; the futile desire to escape, get out, return to pure humanity. But they could do nothing that wasn't in the nature of a bullock; and bullocks wouldn't spontaeneously charge their way out of their field. They'd long since given up.

But William hadn't. He knew that there was a loophole somewhere. There had to be.

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Writers_Block "*cough* someones into furry *cough*"
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Bolsheviki "Oh yes. Yummy, let's serve up a nice plate of genetically altered human. With chips. =3
Wow, this story is more gruesome than I first thought. xDD
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Rac7hel "Just checking. I assume they're working on the physical alterations... it will be much tastier once they get that part figured out. :p"
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Bolsheviki "Right on all counts. =3
Basically it's like having a pet dog that just happens to resemble a human in a suit. x3
And yes, they'll be slaughtered. Food shortages, you know. -nods sagely-
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Rac7hel "So let me get this straight. There are people who have pet dogs, who are actually just people in dog costumes? And people enjoy having that as a pet?
And... people are going to kill and eat the people in cattle costumes? lol
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Writers_Block "Haha classic. I'll put in a branch or two when I start to feel inspired. I have so many projects in motion right now. Ava and I (my gf) are writing a television script together so thats taking up most of my creative powers!"
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Bolsheviki "I'm glad you like it!
...You've put baaaaad images in my brain with that 'mating season' thing. xDDD
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Writers_Block "I just need to say something else. Its a very disturbing and, sick and twisted story (but still very good), but its also like when you drive past a car accident. You don't want to but you have to keep on looking! You've really managed to capture that essence!"
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Writers_Block "Interesting, I'd like to see when the mating season starts!!
Really though this has something that picks at my brain a little. I like stories like that, that make me think that it could actually happen. And I like the soylent green taken to a new level sort of thing here.
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intoalkaseltzer "I need to get into a sci-fi mood and come back and take a stab at writing a branch for this, what a GREAT idea for a story! I love it!"
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Bolsheviki "I'd appreciate that. xD I was fond of this story. It was inspired by the Goodies.
I'm sure seventies comedy shouldn't be inspiring science fiction stories. x3
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Rac7hel "This is very interesting. Why are there no branches yet?! I'll have to think of something..."

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