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Ask the woman if there's a surefire way to seem interesting here

The woman smiled.

"You've just written the text on how not to do it, honey," she said.

Anaina wondered what she meant.

"You sang... that didn't make you different; that made you the same - I was already doing it. And you said SEEMED interesting, like you know you're so not. Tell you what, why don't you just accept that you lost here tonight and accept yo paid $500 to learn something about yourself and move on. This isn't the joint for you, honey."

So saying she turned her back and carried on sipping carrot juice through a straw.

Anaina then

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