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Of Hovering Hoovers and Dancing Dandelions

Maybe,  she should not have eaten the dodgy chocolate brownie cake,  during her break.  Maybe she should have been more suspicious of the man who had handed it to her, telling her to ....

"Enjoy......but not too much eh?"

She must have blacked out at that point, now the relentless pounding, somewhere within, made her writhe in  a pleasurable agony.  Muted sounds of a siren somewhere.   The tones changing as distance betweeen them became greater.  Feelings of being trapped....never to return to the life she knew before.....as though all she held precious was now gone.

Perhaps she herself were evaporating....

Outside the mist grew thick........they looked for her,  but in vain.

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