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by JJ1979 in Mature Themes, Romance, Taboo added April 29, 2008

His House

Screwing her eyes shut tight, she fought to compose her thoughts. This was how it was meant to be. She had known it would be like this. She was not the first girl; she would not be the last. She had been to his house before. Shared in his thoughts. Drank his wine. She knew what he wanted from her.

She felt his body over her. She felt his immutable will upon her. Her diaphragm contracted as the deafening silence of his house stifled the very breath in her lungs. She had heard so much about his kindness, his humanity; but it was always so impersonal – just abstract concepts and metaphors. Here – in the visceral tangibility of this dark little chamber – she was learning the darker truths of his nature.

The silence permeated deeper with each fresh knowledge of her body’s sin as she lay prostrate beneath him. She knew what women were to him – she had heard the stories. Temptresses, adulterers, whores: bound together in womanhood by the sin of their bodies. She had always known what he wanted from her.

Time stretched and contracted as he weighed down yet more heavily upon her. Hers was not to question – the monolithic arrogance of his silence!

A voice cracked through the wire mesh:

'He will forgive us’

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Just Chatting
"Wow... smut-heaven! I'd like to extend my (smutiest) thanks to you!"

posted May 31 by JJ1979

Just Chatting
"I'll post a list on your profile, mmmk?"

posted May 30 by Dysphemism

Just Chatting
"Incidentaly, where is this smut you speak of? I'm a big fan of smut."

posted May 30 by JJ1979

Just Chatting
"I can only speak for myself here... but I've tried to be as immature as possible throughout."

posted May 30 by JJ1979

Just Chatting
"I was kidding, I'm sorry that wasn't clear.
I've written smuttier on here. And, umm... should someone ask Nick to flag this as Mature?"

posted May 29 by Dysphemism

Just Chatting
"I'd contend it had to be at least somewhat erratic to provoke a bout of condescension from an otherwise so good-natured poster as you Dys...
...but surely a story which begins with an experience of Catholic confession being conflated with a rape scene allows room for erotica?!"

posted May 29 by JJ1979

Just Chatting
"Both it and your subsequent comment are - I think it fair to say - entirely erratic digressions; but didn't you read my first chapter as an erotic parody anyway!? (Love scene/rape/catholic guilt)
Anyway, I'm off for more fun with the clown (Inside he's crying)"

posted May 29 by JJ1979

Just Chatting
"Is it a problem that I think the comments are as creepy as the story?"

posted May 28 by Dysphemism

Just Chatting
"lol at both the last two comments :D

If the clown comes back with a case of gout, you might say it was uratic."

posted May 28 by Tasha_Noble

Just Chatting
"Is it too condescending if I point out the difference between 'erratic' and 'erotic'?"

posted May 28 by Dysphemism

Just Chatting
"'I concur' replied JJ1979, giggling coquetishly as the clown tickled his balls."

posted May 28 by JJ1979

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Just Chatting
"This is class! I laughed at loud at that one."

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Just Chatting
"Quality."

posted May 26 by Lucy

Just Chatting
"Thanks for the subsequent chapters guys... I'm enjoying the random violence but what happened to the catholic-guilt undertones; I didn't think I'd made them particularly subtle!"

posted May 19 by JJ1979

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Just Chatting "Wow... smut-heaven! I'd like to extend my (smutiest) thanks to you!"

Just Chatting "I'll post a list on your profile, mmmk?"

Just Chatting "Incidentaly, where is this smut you speak of? I'm a big fan of smut."

Just Chatting "I can only speak for myself here... but I've tried to be as immature as possible throughout."

Just Chatting "I was kidding, I'm sorry that wasn't clear.I've written smuttier on here. And, umm... should someone ask Nick to flag this as Mature?"

Just Chatting "I'd contend it had to be at least somewhat erratic to provoke a bout of condescension from an otherwise so good-natured poster as you Dys......but surely a story which begins with an experience of Catholic confession being conflated with a rape scene allows room for erotica?!"

Just Chatting "Both it and your subsequent comment are - I think it fair to say - entirely erratic digressions; but didn't you read my first chapter as an erotic parody anyway!? (Love scene/rape/catholic guilt)Anyway, I'm off for more fun with the clown (Inside he's crying)"

Just Chatting "Is it a problem that I think the comments are as creepy as the story?"

Just Chatting "lol at both the last two comments :D If the clown comes back with a case of gout, you might say it was uratic."

Just Chatting "Is it too condescending if I point out the difference between 'erratic' and 'erotic'?"

Just Chatting "'I concur' replied JJ1979, giggling coquetishly as the clown tickled his balls."

Just Chatting "Thanks, JJ. I too was wondering where the catholic guilt undertones had gone earlier.This story is so... erratic and unpredictable."

Just Chatting "Absolutely brilliant! Very funny & I love the way you've pulled all the strands in on this one..."

Just Chatting "Very funny!"

Just Chatting "This is class! I laughed at loud at that one."

Just Chatting "Glad you revived this story - it seemed to have ground to a halt."

Just Chatting "Quality."

Just Chatting "Thanks for the subsequent chapters guys... I'm enjoying the random violence but what happened to the catholic-guilt undertones; I didn't think I'd made them particularly subtle!"

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