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...? Put it down and just tell me what in the world is going on? What's wrong with you?" Raising his arm his eyes gazed into hers, a cold blank killer stare. Not John's beautiful pools of blue but instead a dark, steel gray.

Gasping she looked behind her, there was nowhere to go. She was trapped, with nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. "Please, tell me what's going on. Don't hurt me, baby, I love you...” His face twisted up into a horrible grin as he threw his head back and laughed. Finally when his silent joke was over, he stared menacingly at her once more. "I won't do it, I WON'T LET YOU. How could you? HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?" he asked his faced screwed up into pure anger and hate. "Do what, I'm confused! What did I do?" she asked, her eyes searching the room for something, anything. "Now you'll know. You will know pain; just like the pain you caused me." Laughing, he raised the gun, raised it until it was level with her heart;

And pulled the trigger.

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