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...ne Nato, gone over to the other side eh? Well I know what to do with !%$*ing traitors."
    He tried to fire at them, but his rounds were gone, so he threw his gun at them. It hit Ramirez, knocking his torso to the floor.
    "Aha, you traiterous scum, take that. You want some more?" Foster screamed.
    Suddenly the door beside him to the office began to open slowly, and a light shone out at him. Foster got to his feet slowly staring into the small office. His eyes were wide and fearful, but also calm.
    "Wa-wait, I know this, I know you," he called into the office, "what happened?"
    Without warning four lines of tentacle-like black cloth flew out and wrapped around Foster, and as he screamed with his last breath they pulled him into the office, and the door slammed shut behind him. The lights went out once more, and the spiders went back to work building their disturbed webs.

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Writers_Block So, this is a complete and utter first draft. I am simply, SIMPLY splashing this up here to gauge the feeling one gets from reading this story. It's not about grammar or whatever, and this draft moves quickly and doesn't leave a lot in between.
I'm already editing and adding to it, I just want to see how this works as a prologue, and I would appreciate criticism based on storyline and the idea, NOT grammar and not set up or any of that stuff.

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