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...slipped into a coma, or what?” I say, thinking the explanation was clear, “Then you just ran away scared that I was dead and didn’t want to deal with any consequences?”

“No!” She snaps, and cries harder, “It was nothing like that…”

“Then what was it?” I ask, angry.

The thunder is deafening at this point, the lightshow constant. The car rocks in the wind and I pull my hood down to get a good look at her. I want to jump out of that car and just leave. Forget everything that had happened and get on with life. Things were certainly heading down the drain fast.

“You…” She says, “You said you were getting really high, and then you just faded.”

“Faded?”

“You disappeared.” She says, crying and obviously confused, “You started to become transparent and then… you were just… gone.”

IV. Stranger in the Night

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