Dark shadows enveloped my vision. It seemed like I was in a dream all of a sudden. I couldn't picture my surroundings anymore. I couldn't feel the occasional icy breeze of New Jersey anymore. Instead of laying on the cold steel of the bench, it felt like I was floating in mid air. Without a warning, I felt something burning deep inside my neck. It felt so intense that before I knew it, I had fainted inside my shadowed dream...or nightmare, whatever you would call it.

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Thank you Paramore for your song Brick by Boring Brick because your one verse in your song inspired the Fury Series. ;D

I apologize if the chapters are long. They're meant to be like real chapters as if in a real novel. ^ ^

This story started out as a creative writing assignment for my language arts class. When it was finished, I felt as if I shouldn't continue it because the plot is pretty @#%%ty and I tended to repeat my vocabulary when I write. Although, comments and criticism were given and a good friend of mine persuaded me to continue my story. So when my language arts class received a choice between a Writer's Workshop or a Reader's Workshop, of course I picked writer's so I could settle down during class time and let my imagination run free.

Part One, In Phyuri's Perspective is really rushed because I had many distractions during the time we were given to complete our assignment. Of course we were allowed to bring our assignment back home which I did but I epicPhailed and in the end I had to rush it.

Part Two, In Jakae's Perspective is more relaxing because I didn't rush. There's more humor (mostly dark and crude humor, lol) than Part One and it's going to be waaay longer. XD

updated Jun 15 '10 by iNinjaBear