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She was falling right in front of me, right out of the sky and there was nothing I could do to stop her. I tried to chase after her, but she got farther away each time. Her granite colored eyes, barely visible through her wild golden hair, showed how scared she was, “Help me!" she screamed as we broke through the thick layer of clouds. The ground spread out beneath us like and ocean of green. I closed my eyes, trying to think of what I could do to save her. I was directly above her and I could see tears streaming of her face and I knew I couldn't help her.

"I'm sorry," I said, and then I spread my arms and soared back into the sky, looking away seconds before she crashed into the dirt...

 

 

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BrandonW I'm sorry my postings are inconsistant, but I thank thoes who have been following the story. I sort of jump from past to present throughout the story to provide some background info on the characters and to help explain whats going on in the story.... I'm not sure how good of a job im doing at it so please bear with me.

This story is currently under a complete re-write. I have been gone so long i decided to start over because i have some newer ideas for this story. Ill try my best to keep up to date and keep you informed.

I'm making very slow progress!

Correction. Very very very very slow progress.

It appears I might have to draw a picture for chapter five. I'll post a like when its done and I fing a place to upload the picture to.

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