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(Mature for Language) Roxie is having a date at a Chinese restaurant when she receives a cookie fortune: Your life is in danger. Say nothing to anyone. You must leave the city immediately and never return. Repeat: say nothing. After getting attack by a Chinese woman with a knife and receiving a mystery phone call, Roxie must find a guy name Cody if she wants to leave the city alive.

Author Note:

So this short story came off a prompt that I found a website (

At a Chinese restaurant, your character opens his fortune cookie and reads the following message: "Your life is in danger. Say nothing to anyone. You must leave the city immediately and never return. Repeat: say nothing."...

If you decide to write a short story based off this prompt, let me know! I love to read it and see what you did with it.

For now, I'm posting the story in parts so it's easier for me to edit them, it is completed. Leave a comment and let me know what you think! 

Part 1

“Where’s he taking you out for dinner, Roxie?” One last look to make sure my long black hair was still in its curls. It didn’t look as good as when I left the house, but it wasn’t terrible, so I left it alone.

            “No where fancy,” I told Emily over the phone as I checked my makeup to make sure it hadn’t rubbed off. I took extra care to make sure my hazel eyes popped out. Even curling my hair was out character for me, but I wanted to make a good impression. “Anyways, I gotta go. I spent long enough in the restroom, he probably thinks I’m either taking a dump or ditching him.”

            Emily sighed. “That’s an exaggeration, you’ve only been gone a couple of minutes. Now tell me, what are you eating?”

            “Chinese, Emily. Bye.” Before Emily could say anything I hung up on her and stuffed my phone back in my purse. One last look in the mirror and a double check to make sure my zipper was up on my pants, I exited the restroom.

            I headed back over to the table where Allan, my date, was waiting for me. We first met at a bar a couple of days ago. He offered me a Band-Aid when I cut my finger by accident. We chatted for a long time and when I was leaving he asked if I would see a movie and have dinner with him. Sounded like a typical cliché boring date, but I said okay since I enjoyed talking to him so much.

            So here I was, at a nice Chinese restaurant and afterwards we were going to see a movie. What movie we were going to see was a surprise. When I sat back down at our table, Allan smiled at me. “Our food still hasn’t arrived yet, I’m going to go check on it.” I said okay as he left the table.

            As I was waiting, a waitress with a basket of fortunate cookies came up to me, “Fortune Cookie?” she asked.

            “Yes please!” She handed me one and left. I watched her walk away, not stopping at the other tables to offer them fortune cookies. I concluded she had passed the others their fortune cookies while I was in the restroom.

            As I ate the cookie, I read my fortune, “Your life is in danger. Say nothing to anyone. You must leave the city immediately and never return. Repeat: say nothing.” I laughed; of course I would get a creepy fortune. I put it in my pocket so I could show it to Emily later. I was sure she would get a kick out of it too.

            A different waitress approached me, “Are you Miss Roxie?” she asked with a heavy Chinese accent.


            “Mr. Allan asked me to bring you back to him. He has a surprise for you. Please follow me.”

            “Okay…” Strange, I thought. I hoped the guy wasn’t already trying to propose to me on our first date.

            I grabbed my purse and followed the waitress towards the back of the restaurant. She led me through a pair of double doors, out of the customers view and down a hallway to a back door that led to the alley. I followed her a couple of steps outside then stopped, “Um… I think I should go back in…” I didn’t finish my sentence when she suddenly turned around, wielding a knife at me. Before my brain had time to process that she was going to attack me, my body reacted, applying the Aikido training I’ve been doing for years. I used a tanto dori move, throwing her and disarming the knife from her grip. Her head hit the ground during the throw knocking her unconscious. “Shit!” I bent down and felt for a pulse. I breathed a sigh of relief. She was still alive.

            I grabbed my phone from my purse and dialed 911. I put the phone to my ear and listen to it ring once. “Hello Roxie,” said a male voice. “It looks like you’ve chosen to ignore my warning.”

The End

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