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...ell - up!" The Captain released the Pilot and turned towards the bridge, which on this small vessel wasn't far, leaving the Pilot speechless. He had known the captain for a long time and thought of him as a friend before a Captain. He had been threatened by him many times, but not once did it ever get physical. His pride was hurt. His plea had failed. What's more the captain was a scary man when he wasn't within an inch of his face. Before leaving through the door to the bridge, the Captain turned and spoke again. The anger had gone but the autority was still there. "I dont know what we're gonna find but we're going to find it. Either you take us down or i will. And we'll be alot more comfortable and alot less dead if you do it." The Pilot watched the Captain step through the door and though he was entirely against the idea, he knew he would land the ship. He composed himself as best he could and made after the Captain. He would need to steady his hand before taking the ship down.

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seldom "Hey, This is fine - interesting start, but seriously hard to read without any paragraph indents.
Please indent paras and also every time a new person speaks?
The content, plot and characters are fine but if you don't use these things v few people will find this out :)
- helpful hint but obviously just my opinion ;)
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