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song ends

 

a sudden hault,

the music

            stopped.                                                      you looked at me, I looked at you.                                                            which one  had      been wooing                                                            whom?                                                                                                                                                                                                     "thanks," she said

                                    and turned her head

                                                               @@ <-- to look at her castanets

it isn't the same

as living in spain

but this is as close as it gets.

 

                                    

 

 

 

 

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