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...;     "You let a sixth Terran human fall!" Alnneyz's deep voice carried rich overtones, arching into high frequencies. "You defied the prophecy. That will diminish their belief in us. And when their belief falters, we cease to exist!"

"Master, I will kill one in our world, where we have divine jurisdiction and power."

            "That's more like it! Fate is an artificial construct, and as such, we must guard it. Now, that is, very much, what I like to hear. I do not care which one of the six you kill, so long as it is not the one marked by my sister."

            "Very well, Master. Consider it done."

Time hung still no longer. And whether either seat was empty or not; nobody noticed.

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Dysphemism Consider this somewhat Narnian. Minus the Christian undertones.

Right now, I don't have much outline to give. Usually, I would... but I have not vividly brainstormed past the first chapter yet.

And I think it's good that I left a lot of the mysterious 'other reality' to be written in by the next person.

I was thinking they'd fall lightly from the sky in the other world. If they do not all appear in the same place, I was thinking that Alison's gaming device might fall to a place of its own and get picked up by some random person and kept as a relic and stowed in a temple for later in the story. Nostalgic value for her, I guess.

I suggest Moe's last name be 'Fisher'. Why? Read the title of the story.

Maybe his brother (Aaron) is one of the other four that remain unmentioned, thus far. They are named Biblically after Moses and Aaron. Otherwise, I would not name a character after myself. But since I'm not the only writer, and I had other reasons for choosing the name, I figured it was excusable.

Also please note that the German etymology of 'Alison' means 'of noble kind'.

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