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Finding Prometheus

Even before Sophie reached the curb, the taxi took off.  She'd paid the cab driver twice the fare so he'd wait for her, and she was momentarily flustered. She'd have to call for another cab.  And so few cabs traveled into Low-town. Virtually none came after dark-which's when the zombies came out.

She hopped up on the curb, and looked around her.  Low-town Vancouver was a slum.  Most of the buildings were burnt out shells or abandoned storefronts, reinforced to support the upper layers, and the network of walkways and bridges that spanned across the city.

Those that actually lived in Low-town were Zombies, Touchers, or Victims with a capital V.  Sophie didn't want to stay there a minute longer than she had to.  But, she had traveled across town to get the story that would make her career. She'd found Dr Methen

Stopping momentarily at the front door of The Oppenheimer, she checked her appearance.  Her red hair was pulled back into a conservative bun, so tight that not a single strand fell beyond the basic-black veil.  She was dressed a little too conservatively, in basic black, her skirt well below the regulation hemline, and her cleavage pressed to her body tightly. 

Regulations might force her to wear gender-specific clothing, but she looked boyish on purpose.  If the Touchers didn't see you as anything special, then they didn't reach out to you.  And in Low-town, there were more than enough gender-benders that few enough would scope her out.  She hoped.

Once inside the hotel foyer, She was surprised to see the apartment lobby in relatively good condition.  Except for the occasional bullet-hole or graffiti mark that had been diligently washed away, Sophie could almost visualize the grandeur it held when her mother had danced there.

The elevator was broken; Sophie took the stairs, grimacing as the metal pins in her ankle ground together.   The lights were out in teh stairwell and the third-floor the hallway as well, but Sophie found her way to the proper apartment. 

She rapped sharply on the door, twice, and waited, fixing her hair, and arranging her hood to reveal her eyes through her veil.  The voice that called through the door was thick and gravelly.  "Go away!  I have a gun."

Sophie called out.  "Dr. Methen.  I'm Sophie Coran.  I got your letter."

The bolts on three separate locks ka-chunked out of their sockets.  The door opened a crack, and a long, unveiled face came into view.  He had the look of a slightly animated cadaver, pale, pale skin, deeply lined.  Tightly pursed lips, severe.

"The reporter?" His voice was incredulous.  Sophie held up his letter, so he could see his handwriting. 

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "Actually I tend to think of the ending first and almost work backwards when I'm writing a plot.

Well here it is. Hope it's alright an all that.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for jait "It's open to whichever way it goes... I don't have a hard-and-fast plot-direction for it. Protagonize has been been an excellent medium in which to practice my openings... Sadly, it's my endings that need the most work."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Crymzon "This is open to so many possibilities. I'm really looking forward to reading more. I'll more than likely branch myself when I figure out which way to send the plot. I'm hopeing it'll be alright whichever way.

Definately well written.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "I drive through the east side every day on the way to work, so it home. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for jait "Heh. Lived and worked in Van for a few years... Lived in New West, Surrey and North Delta, worked all over, including a 3-year stint doing security in the Downtown East Side... I know my slums :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 ""Low-town Vancouver was a slum."

Not far off from reality, either. :p
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian ""ka-chunk"...what a lovely onomatopoeia : ) Yes...I quite like ka-chunk..."

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