A first draft, edited very slightly as I go along, written for National Novel Writing Month. More of a proof read than an edit, really, so any major plot issues let me know! You can also follow this on YouTube by subscribing to 'MJLongman'.
Please don't be too harsh on me... I wrote this in a week. Well, a week and a half. Yeah, I know, I wrote a lot that month.
Critique welcome, but be gentle. Remember that this is a FIRST draft and so typos will be rife. Please feel free to point out any particularly humourous ones.