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Say hello to Hailyn, then ask what's wrong

"Just....nothing, it's ok" she replies, having seemed to have changed suddenly after speaking to you. You have obviously brightened her spirits.

"Ok, if you're sure" You reply, then ask about Paul

"No sign of him yet, let's go down to the creek, meet him there" Ciana says.

The group is in 2 minds about this, as Hailyn, the anxiety returning, would rather wait for him by the bakery, whilst Ciana would obviously like to meet him at the creek

Do you:

Go with Ciana's idea, and decide to meet him at the creek

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UltimaDan A basic, typical fantasy style story with all the classic elements - elves in the forest, dwarves underground, old wizards in towers and the like. It's largely just to experiment with the form more than anything, although the idea formed ages ago before I got depressed.

The idea is that about a dozen characters meet each other along the way on a perilous journey north into the heart of evil/darkness/symbolic force thereof.

Arrith and co head north-west to the capital, Pasaveer, a day or two out from their home town of Terris. Kemvar accompanies them. They are looking for information about a cursed armour, shield and weapon that one of the goblin leaders mutters something about. On your trail is the men with wolf tattoos, and behind them is the rouge Hailyn has been waiting like a lover for.

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