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-Feel

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                                               Feel

This feeling is
holding metal bearings
for the first time,
filling your hand.
Knowing is irrelevant,
but hold them.
keep hold.
falling from your fingers
click
cling
muffled chime
Your eyes cross and pan.
Dropping lasts long,
it's a feeling
you can hardly stand.

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