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...A baggage handler stepped in afterwards with her bags, which he promptly put under her seat, and left.

You didn’t know what to do. She looked about the same age as you, wearing a light blue summer dress, with light brown hair, and grey-blue eyes. Her dress was embroidered along the side with white flower petals. She sat a few rows up from you, on the other side, also facing the window. You could still see that her face was still full of tears in the glass.

The train, since picking up its passengers, began to chug, soon leaving the station. After a little while, you awoke to the train passing one of many grain elevators. She was still sad.

She’ll soon get over it, she doesn’t need me.

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Aurix Well if you're wondering, this was written before "Linear Stories" were introduced, so, more or less I've come to realise that only one branch of this story should exist.

The intention of the story is to have a gentle narrative that progressively gets more emotionally intense as the two protagonists, Matthew and Claire, weave and intertwine to form a deeper and more meaningful relationship.

Matthew: 19. Son of Mark and Kate Levine, Born in Thunder Bay, Ontario. Difinitive, and of amiable nature. Direct with diction, strong with rhetoric, quick to please, weary of quarrels, but being in, makes it that the opponent is weary of thee (see Hamlet 1.3.67)

Claire: 18. Daughter of Henry and Emma Falstaff, Born in Regina, Saskatchewan. Of a gentle, innocent, pleasant nature. She will be clear about her position, however, especially if she disagrees about something of great importance.

Final notes.

- I will not appreciate DSV (Drugs, Sex, or Violence) in this piece.
- Feel free to add supporting characters.. they are at school, of course.
- I will inject more elements of fantasy in due course.

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