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...or.His marks on her aging body.And she could still smell the whisky and the cigarettes.But there was an unusual thing.It was the first time that a man made her feel uneasy.A bit scared even.Last night she blamed it on the whisky but now....

There was something very weird about this man in general.It was not the big tattoo on his back.It supposedly was there to show off and maybe even scare people,she guessed.She wasn't scared about that.What added a pinch of uncomfortableness was the big knife he produced out of his trench,as soon as they had entered the room.He gorged on her suprised face as he lay the knife on the bediside table.What he didn't know was that she couldn't even decide what scared her more - the knife or the look on his face that very moment.This and the fact that his impeccable appearence did not with the rest of this guy...

So she still lay here - with the handcuffs on and her hands getting numb - thinking what to do next. How to proceed from here on.

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