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October 14th, 1869

I saw him again today.

That strange, intriguing boy. I also managed to catch his name as his friend  spoke it. Lucas. It seems to fit him well, I can picture him as a Lucas. He didn't see me watching him, he was too preoccupied with the conversation at hand. 

Oh he's beautiful, he really is. His hair is a fair blonde and the sun always manages to catch it at the right angle, bringing out the lighter shades and giving him a golden halo. I only saw the back of him today, so I'm not familiar with the rest of his features but I can imagine they are as beautiful as the rest that I did see.

Oh, only time will tell.

Maria

 

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October 19th, 1869

Well, time certainly did tell.

I saw him in perfect view today, and I was not disappointed. I know this portrays me as vain and shallow but you have no idea what it's like, living here. I can only imagine it's like someone that's been good their entire life, getting that first sip of rebellion; it's intoxicating.

They want more.

Maria

 

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October 25th 1869

He spoke to me today. Oh it was beautiful. His voice is just as lovely as his appearance. 

I was sat down by the river, a small part of me hoping I would see him, just watching the world go by. I watched the summer sunshine play on the water, illuminating it with jewels and sparkles. 

'This is my favourite place to come when I need time to think,' I heard an unfamiliar voice behind me.

I knew it was him, deep in my gut I knew, and yet it did not stop the surprise and delight from coursing through me, staggering and completely unjustified it rendered me speechless. I could only stare up at him, marvel in his beauty looking like the fool I was.

'Sorry if I disturbed you, I shall leave you to it.' He began to walk off when I found my speech again.

'Wait,' I managed to call out. 'Sorry I just...I was daydreaming.' A pretty poor excuse but the best one I could think of at the time.

He laughed, a wonderfully melodic sound. He chose to sit beside me, only mere inches away, and we watched the river together. Not much was said after that. He introduced himself as Lucas (like I didn't know!) and that was about it. The silence wasn't uncomfortable, it just felt right. 

What more am I to learn of this stranger?

Maria

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Characters;
Name: Hailey Samuels
Age: 17
Appearance:Very pretty. Olive toned complexion, long wavy black hair and large brown eyes. Slender figure, around 5 foot 7. Takes care of her appearance. Wouldn't be seen dead in the same outfit two days in a row.
Personality: Quite materialistic. Party animal. She's spoilt and rich and popular among her friends. She's the only child, so she's used to getting what she wants. Her parents are divorced and she uses this to guilt trip them into giving her things. Despite all this she does try to be a good friend and always looks for the best in people.
Other: Best friends with Mia.

Name: Emmia 'Mia' Rose Williams
Age: 17
Appearance: Shoulder length dark blonde hair with darker undertones. Sapphire blue eyes, usually rimmed with eyeliner and dark eyeshadow making her appear mysterious + alluring. Ivory complexion. 5 foot 6.
Personality: Nowhere near as confident as Hailey, tends to stay in her best friend's shadow. Comes from a broken home, has very little self esteem. Will only let loose with the help of alcohol.
Other: Best friends with Hailey.

Name: Asher (Last name unknown)
Age: Physical age: 17. Real age: A little over 100
Appearance: Incredibly mysterious in his appearance AND personality. Very dark hair, almost black. Pale complexion + striking blue eyes. Tall with a lean, muscular body he prefers to dress in shades of black and grey. Favours a black leather jacket.
Personality: Alluring + mysterious. Quite smug and arrogant at times. Knows how to get under people's skin. Will defend himself at all times.
Other: Is a vampire.

Name: Gabriel (Last name also unknown)
Age: Physical: 17. Real: 300 and something.
Appearance: Nowhere near as mysterious as Asher, he's ethereally beautiful. Light blonde hair and bright green eyes. Same height + build as Asher although he prefers a more casual dress style.
Personality: A little mysterious and reluctant about his past. Appealing. Comes off as introvert and warm, but there is a whole other side to him that is yet to be seen. Can be romantic.
Other: "Fallen" angel, tries to repent for his past sins.

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